Hmm... the bassier sounds were a bit muffled / obtuse / whatever you say in english and tended to "slide together" (oh, you're from Sweden
Then "grötigt" would be the word), so to say, producing a not so clear sound.
I for one prefer clear melodies, something that you got going to some extent in the second part of the song (I get that it was the intention to make it as you did though); you have a nice mood going there though.
Overall not bad; re-making it with some higher quality samples could make it better yet
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