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3 Dimensional Chat / Hunting Rifle WIP

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Madscientist
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Posted: 17th Jun 2011 01:06 Edited at: 17th Jun 2011 01:18
Hi, I've been working on this rifle for a game for about a day now. Let me know what you think and criticize please.
Model without texture or animation:
Polys: 919


Wireframe:


AJ Schaeffer
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Posted: 17th Jun 2011 01:18
Wow it looks great!

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Van B
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Posted: 17th Jun 2011 01:22
Looks great! - nice clean model from the looks of it. Would be good to see a FPS view too of course.

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Wolf
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Posted: 17th Jun 2011 03:22
Man, why is almost everyone on this board better than me

This is a fine model, pal! Clean, detailed and well executed!
The polycount is remarkable aswell.

Is it a remington?



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Madscientist
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Posted: 17th Jun 2011 03:25 Edited at: 17th Jun 2011 03:38
Ok here's a FPS view. Ignore those dark spots, they're just smoothing errors and won't show up after texturing.
Thanks for the positive feedback!
@Wolf I don't know what gun this is, I just googled "hunting rifle" and found reference images.
Do you think that the barrel needs more polys?


Madscientist
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Posted: 18th Jun 2011 02:13
Just finished unwrapping it! Most painful part complete.


Wolf
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Posted: 19th Jun 2011 02:09
Unwrapping. If you would compare modeling to getting married, unwrapping most certainly is the divorce

That was kinda flat, wasn't it? To add something useful: Its a winchester rifle.



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Quik
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Posted: 19th Jun 2011 02:37
really clean and nice look you got there!
Quote: "If you would compare modeling to getting married, unwrapping most certainly is the divorce"


dude, thats... epic! well said hah

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Travis Gatlin
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Posted: 19th Jun 2011 06:12
I like this! some of the best work i've seen on here in awhile!

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Madscientist
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2011 17:48 Edited at: 22nd Jun 2011 17:48
Got a question, what kind of wood should I use for the stock and body textures?

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lazerus
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Posted: 23rd Jun 2011 17:52
A nice bit of birch would be nice.
Not the same rifle but a nice bit of varnish and polish ad they come out great.



Madscientist
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Posted: 25th Jun 2011 18:49 Edited at: 25th Jun 2011 19:01
Ok I finished texturing it. Now I need to make hands...
Crit texture please.


AJ Schaeffer
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Posted: 26th Jun 2011 05:25
Looks solid colored and cartoony. No wear and tear or any sign of use. The metal looks a little too perfect. The wood looks fine though.

Still looks pretty good though.

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Madscientist
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Posted: 26th Jun 2011 19:04
Ok, thanks. Ill add some scratches to the metal and post back.

The Zoq2
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Posted: 27th Jun 2011 13:06
That model looks awsome!!

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Posted: 28th Jun 2011 03:43 Edited at: 28th Jun 2011 03:50
So I added a little more "wear and tear" AJ Schaeffer said. Here's what I got:


Here's a Fps view.


AJ Schaeffer
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Posted: 28th Jun 2011 04:12
Looks MUCH better!

Good work!

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Posted: 28th Jun 2011 20:31
much much better indeed

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