I shall help you out a little alright?
1. Make an account on imageshack and upload the pictures
2. Copy the DIRECT LINK
3. Come back to the forums and edit your post
4. Remove the links you have, and click the
Image button
5. Paste in the DIRECT LINK and then save your post
You shall now have pictures in your post
Now i shall grade the actual game, from the screenshots it looks really bland. Like there is really nothing, it's just a dark hallway with a dead guy.
I have seen these types of games done so much in FPSC it's not even funny. Once i have finished downloading the game i will edit my post and give more feedback. Sorry if that is harsh, im not trying to be mean im just posting my thoughts.
Why don't you have a look at some other games in the WIP section or even the showcase section to get IDEAS for your games. Now that doesn't mean copy what you see, it means look at what others have done and try to improve your game using methods others have done such as lightmapping and shaders, etc.
Hope this helps!
-Josh
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