i will give you a feedback, i think that when the trance comes in with harmonix makes for a better tune. the melody is good and spritely, the sound for the first melodic tone is a bit worbly but it depends on what atmosphere your after, this would suite a final fantasy ending, and for a first its very good. i am like you when my game making hits a lull i go into music.
as this is a music give away section, i hope you dont mind me giving away a tune on your page, it may encourage a music debate or more hits for you.
if you want i can take it off, but its free and hoping you may get some ideas too.
im going to give this tune to anyone who wants it use in your games or whatever as long as you do not claim it as your own, in other words
if using this tune keep quiet on who made it or give me a shout out, but you did not make this
science boy- would prefer a shout out as l.s.lee ( my dj and producer name )
but use it in game, or in a project, i cant see anyone selling this so i feel safe on that, and even if you did its a compliment and a confidence boost. enjoy
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