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FPSC Classic Models and Media / rate my music please

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jordmans
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Posted: 5th Oct 2011 20:26
hi all!

after being away for quite some time i decided to start fooling around again with fpsc.

been moddeling and texturing for a while but got bored so i tried to make music for once.

Now.. This is my first time creating my own game music so don't be too hard on me.

sorry for the anoying preview sounds but I gotta protect my property haha..

This is what i got so far.. it's a happy tune.. a bit rpg stylish.
Reminds me of heaven.. or a happy peacefull village.


so rate and commant please

Greetings

currently focusing on making game music.. so i'm taking requests.. just for practice.. so send me a pm
jordmans
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Posted: 6th Oct 2011 17:31
come on.. 24 views and nobody is willing to give me any feedback? ..

currently focusing on making game music.. so i'm taking requests.. just for practice.. so send me a pm
Shakleford
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Posted: 6th Oct 2011 18:57
This is not bad at all, quite good for yout first shot. Has a surreal kinda sound. The beginning (not the preview) reminds me a bit of the opera a the end of Portal 2.
I would give this about 7 or an 8. Its original sounding, different, and would defiantely fit into an RPG, or fantasy game. The title (happy end) is very fitting as I could see this at the end of agame, perhaps during credits, as scenes from the game go on in the background. Keep up the good work, I would definately like to hear some more.

I recently learned to sleep with my eyes open. ..... God am I tired
jordmans
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Posted: 6th Oct 2011 19:18
Nice to see you like it .. i got some other songs aswell.. there all loop songs so they can all be used ingame.. i don't know if there are people interested in them. If so .. im willing to upload them .. for free offcourse

currently focusing on making game music.. so i'm taking requests.. just for practice.. so send me a pm
Wheatleyy
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Posted: 8th Oct 2011 23:40
Sounds good, shoot me an email because Im very interested Always on the hunt for good music.

science boy
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Posted: 10th Oct 2011 14:34 Edited at: 10th Oct 2011 14:38
i will give you a feedback, i think that when the trance comes in with harmonix makes for a better tune. the melody is good and spritely, the sound for the first melodic tone is a bit worbly but it depends on what atmosphere your after, this would suite a final fantasy ending, and for a first its very good. i am like you when my game making hits a lull i go into music.

as this is a music give away section, i hope you dont mind me giving away a tune on your page, it may encourage a music debate or more hits for you.

if you want i can take it off, but its free and hoping you may get some ideas too.

im going to give this tune to anyone who wants it use in your games or whatever as long as you do not claim it as your own, in other words

if using this tune keep quiet on who made it or give me a shout out, but you did not make this

science boy- would prefer a shout out as l.s.lee ( my dj and producer name )

but use it in game, or in a project, i cant see anyone selling this so i feel safe on that, and even if you did its a compliment and a confidence boost. enjoy

an unquenchable thirst for knowledge of game creation!!!
jordmans
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Posted: 19th Oct 2011 19:00
@ wheatleyy .. thanks for those kind words .. although i can't seem to find your email anywhere lolz..

@science boy.. sounds good .. but u couldve made a new thread to promote it offcourse.. no offense..

greetz

currently focusing on making game music.. so i'm taking requests.. just for practice.. so send me a pm
Northern
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Posted: 19th Oct 2011 20:42
Hi Jordmans,

I did like the second half of the song because the melody was more pleasant to hear.

The first half of the song there was a lot of repetition of the same beat, which can be a little annoying to hear the melody, in my opinion of course. Please, don't get me wrong.

As making video game, making music is a very hard task as well.

Good work and keep walking.

Good luck!

Cheers.

Northern
Armageddon Games
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Posted: 21st Oct 2011 10:18
Sounds pretty decent.. Keep working on it man.

If you need any type of Idea or just want to hear examples and listen to learn-- visit my music page here

I will try to answer any questions you may have bud,


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