Hey TriSpefear Studios,
Firstly there are a couple of problems with this level that I see, but trust me, I am no professional when it comes to this. I am glad that you are trying harder and harder to improve.
Firstly there is nothing on the ceiling. No lights, no fans or ventilation shafts, usually there is always something on a ceiling.
The walls are a little bare, it could maybe some pictures, or something like that. The desk looks like rock and its out of place with the wooden interior.
Most of all, look how close the char is to the fire place. If your like I, I like to stretch after a long day on the computer, or selling intelligence from what it looks like in that screen. If I fell backwards we are going to have a BBQ. The fireplace should be positioned somewhere else, you would have to take extra caution when getting out of that desk so something doesn't catch on fire.
Think about paper, if a piece of very important paper slides off the end of the desk it would glide back potentially catching on fire.
Also, if your job is to shoot the guy behind the desk even with body armor the blunt of the ballistic would make him fall backward right into the fire. Other than that its a great scene. Keep it up!
