The map itself is good, it's moody and technically everything's as good as it was in the Sanatorium map, which was also really good. Now, I have some negative points here, but bear in mind, that I still thought that this game was really good (for a one map page hunting game).
But some negatives:
-The paintings.
They seem to have pictures of Pewdiepie and some other stuff on them, making them seem very out of place, it really eats the experience. I know it's cool that he played your game and all, and I think that a small tribute that could be found somewhere in the map would have been good, but this was really overshooting it.
-The graffiti wall
It had the same effect. "U mad bro" and trollface and some Pewdipie writings on walls and such. Maybe it's a personal gripe, but I really hate the rageface memes (trollface, the word troll [used as a verb] in itself and all the other faces), so it was really annoying to see that on the wall, in a game that builds it ambience really well otherwise.
I'd like to say glowsticks too. They're not a bad addition, don't get me wrong, but I don't know what they're supposed to do, as they didn't light up or anything. But they're a nice addition anyways.
Otherwise, it's all good. I wish that for the next map, you try to come up with another objective than finding pages, as after 3 games it has gotten really repetitive. They're fun for what they are, but that can't carry so many games. But if you decide to continue on the page finding route, that's fine and I will play them anyways and probably enjoy them.
It was also cool to have a female protagonist, I know it didn't change anything in the game, but I think it has a different mood going on when you have a female protagonist. At first I thought that it's not going to make any difference, as you never actually see your character or anything, but I forgot that you can hear her
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I found 14 pages, so I don't know if something mind blowing happens in the ending. Overall, I enjoyed it, will try it again a couple of times, but it did have it's problems, they didn't completely ruin the game, but they were still enough in the way.
But that's just my 2 cents, can't wait to see what you come up with next!
