Ok, I downloaded this and played through part (I think all, but not sure?) of the demo.
1. Spelling errors in the load screen. Specifically, the use of the contraction "you're". It should be YOUR, not YOU'RE. Sorry, but spelling errors bother the heck out of me.
2. Is the furniture supposed to be suspended in mid-air for no apparent reason?
3. The enemies are a decent toughness, but none of them actually have weapons. They are firing upon the player, but none of them have weapons displayed.
4. I was able to actually jump up on the suspended desk in the initial player spawn area, then hop over the wardrobes. Not sure if this should happen, but I'd suggest - at the very least - an invisible wall on top of the wardrobes to prevent this from happening.
5. The loading screen shows the INTERACTION button as E. When I got close to a door, the HUD for "Press ENTER to use" popped up. The actual button to press to open the door was F. These should all be synced so as not to confuse players.
6. The "yippee!" sound when you jump is annoying. So much so that I actually turned the volume off on my computer so I didn't have to hear it.
7. In one spot I ended up dying, which is fine by me. But you respawn with your back to the enemy that killed you (large room, fire in one spot). Took me several tries to spin fast enough to kill the guy without immediately dying again.
The premise is good, and I like the media used. But far too many flaws to be viable.
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In memory of Nanee. 9/1/1993 - 5/16/2009. Rest in Peace, little girl.