First you need a ingame screenshot and a story, otherwise this thread gets locked.
Second the game report:
Graphic:5/10 your lamps must shine,floor is tiled, more furniture(less empty room)
Storytelling: "I must go out of here" sorry dude, but that is not a good story. Sounds like a slender game and nobody need a slender game anymore. We have enought from them. Also we not want a zombie survival shooter anymore.
Ambience: Ambience is good. Sounds, dark rooms and work(small joke). Well done
Environment: "I see a phone, I can not use. I see documents, I can not read. I am a player and I am stupid" Come on. We need active environment. When I see a phone, I want to hear that the line is dead. I see documents and I want to read it or hear:"Not very intersting". Think about that.
I create a game too and I hate it at the moment, because I want to add so much, but always I get system cap error or I do not fancy. I know it is hard, but try to make your game as beautiful as possible. So you can be proud.
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