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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 02:15
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Just thought why not, show it off a little, critic is always good.



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Pincho Paxton
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 03:14
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It's good, but the creases in his face are too big.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 03:18
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Quote: "but the creases in his face are too big"


Thank you, I will make them thinner and shorter , everything is on layers so it will be easier.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 04:38
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Up date, took awhile, but fixed the lines in his face and also added a vest for added look.



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Ortu
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 07:26
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proportions and forms look good, but you've got a lot of wavy edges. this is often an issue with using photo sourced textures. there is only so much you can do with the uv to keep them from stretching or distorting without a great deal of work in photo editing.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 08:02
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Quote: "there is only so much you can do with the uv to keep them from stretching or distorting without a great deal of work in photo editing."


Tell me about it, man, only if, the end product will look better I hope, thanks for the critic.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Jul 2013 23:48 Edited at: 4th Jul 2013 00:00
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Update''

just hanging around






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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 4th Jul 2013 23:53
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setting morph targets for face animation with vowels and expressions, will target each morph with bones.



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Ortu
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Posted: 6th Jul 2013 22:30
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good deformation so far, looking forward to seeing it with bones! facial weighting is tricky.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 7th Jul 2013 03:08
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Quote: "good deformation so far, looking forward to seeing it with bones! facial weighting is tricky."


Well I am mixing this with dark voices, so far, it looks real good and working.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 8th Jul 2013 10:10 Edited at: 8th Jul 2013 10:13
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New creation from me, this one is all done in layers from separating arms and head and shirt. critic is welcome.

The lighting is way to close, sorry.







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Ortu
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Posted: 8th Jul 2013 21:30
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when layering like this, it really benefits from a sense of thickness. you dont need to build out the whole interior, just take the outer rims and extrude in towards the body, you add one extra edge loop at each hole (sleeves, waist, neck etc) but the visual gain is worth it.

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Posted: 19th Jul 2013 07:35
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The textures on the new one fit much more closely than the previous guy, looking pretty good !

Is the strange shading on his head just a lighting/normals issue, or is that a texture seam?

It also seems like he has a very tall forehead, but that might be caused by the strange seam as well.
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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 19th Jul 2013 10:34
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that is why i post them here, to see things I never do, thank you for pointing thease things out. stuff for me to pay attention to while working.

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