I liked the action-packed feel of the game and the ambient music.
Here are some tips:
-Turn down that bloom, it's way overdone and destroys the atmosphere of the game.
-Change your lightmap settings. A lot of new games here suffer from this issue. Your atmosphere looks really bland and looks really obvious its made in FPSC. If you want to make a good game in FPSC you should aim for an authentic atmosphere and quality lighting. Use this thread to guide you here:
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=186371&b=21
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=169793&b=21
-Use custom media. Using those stock sci-fi segments doesn't look good. It looks uninspired and unoriginal. We have lots of kind gentlemen here who gives out models for free. Just go to the models and media section and download those models made by cosmic prophet and many others.
-Get rid of those weapons. Its really weird seeing modern day weapons in a very sci-fi oriented game.
Quote: "Please Give Feedback i want this to be the Best game on FPS Creator"
Before you aim to create the "Best game on FPS Creator" you should first learn how to make a "good game in FPS Creator". Remember, you need to learn how to walk before you start learning how to run.
All in all, your first game has potential but it can be improved on a lot of areas. I look forward to seeing this grow.