Quote: "I didnt wrote the shader"
I most certainly know you did not write it; you just need to
learn how to adjust it, to make it look the way you want it to look; otherwise find someone to do it for you. I do not have the time unfortunately, looks like it could take hours just to figure out where the problem is.
Try asking Evolved himself;
go to his forum; he will know more than anyone else since he wrote the thing.
Meanwhile I hope you get the help you are asking for.
As far as depth of field and shadows, it does not get any easier than what is the case now with water example.
It is possible to make shaders work together, or combine them; but it takes hard work. You'd have to learn how to write one first.