Thank you for your comments Exeat, I'll try to implement those things into the book, but as you know its his book not really mine, so its all up to him. And you are right, we aren't done, but still those are important things for newcomers to know. Thats the kind of feedback we want before we finish.
As for progress, WMG has taken over the formatting, while I have just completed Chapters 13 and 14. My laptop was gone all weekend
because my mom needed it for work, but I have it back and progress is being made. So now I am going to continue working and try to add additional chapters that need to be added.
If anyone else has any comments on the book and how it can be improved, just post here and tell us what needs to be done. After all, it is for the public, not just ourselves, so what you need needs to be put in.
-Vash the Stampede
"This world is LOVE and PEACE!" -Vash the Stampede