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Pinball Wizard
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 07:30
Anybody here a writer (good or bad)? Well, check out my writing:

[url:http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]See My Writing[/url].


Pinball Wizard...
Ian T
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 07:32 Edited at: 1st Oct 2004 07:32
Apollo uses [ href ] tags not [ url ]s .

I'll look now. Are you looking for suggestions, constructive critisism, or just support?

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Neofish
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 07:52
See My Writing.

should work

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Jimmy
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 08:25 Edited at: 1st Oct 2004 08:40
I'm going to pwn your writing with criticism only a rabbit could appreciate.

It's pretty good, there are some grammar issues, some redundancy and some unnecessary parts, but all in all it's better than some other CRAP floating around... such as anything Mouse has written, what a fraud.


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Ilya
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 09:04 Edited at: 1st Oct 2004 09:04
Quote: "[url:http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]"

Don't you mean
[ url=http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]
without the space?

Ian T
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 09:06
Quote: "such as anything Mouse has written, what a fraud. "


You obviously don't understand-- my writing isn't for critics !

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JoelJ
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 09:21
lol

Absent.
Dave J
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Posted: 1st Oct 2004 10:18
Quote: "Don't you mean
[ url=http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]
without the space?"


Actually, it should probably be:

[[/b]href]http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp[/[b]href]

Alternatively:

[[/b]url=http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]My Link[/[b]url]

Or even:

[[/b]href=http://www.writing.com/authors/zackp]My Link[/[b]href]

Any of the 3 will do.


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