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2D All the way! / Can I get some Cronstructive Crit on this guy?

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Blazer
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Posted: 5th Feb 2003 02:14
http://www.geocities.com/legends_db/Guy.gif

its a guy for my 2d game, Is his proportions right? Should he have a black outline? Is his muscles in the right place? ect....

Thx in advance
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Blazer
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Posted: 5th Feb 2003 02:16
Image dosn't work

http://www.geocities.com/legends_db/Guy.gif

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Blazer
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Posted: 5th Feb 2003 02:17
can't link to geocitys, gona have to copy it into url, sorry for the inconvience

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Jadelion
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Posted: 5th Feb 2003 22:27
not bad, the sword might be a littel big for suck a littel guy, and you might want to work on the position of the back leg, it looks sorta off.

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Posted: 6th Feb 2003 04:07
cool, i love those straight ankles

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Blazer
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Posted: 6th Feb 2003 05:06
Yes, I think your right he is kind fo puny for a sword that size. Also you said his back foot is ofset, what direction do I need to move it?

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Brent_Seraphim
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Posted: 6th Feb 2003 05:33
It's pretty good, I do not believe his sword is too big, It depends on the story to make it believable. To me it seems to be no larger than a bastard sword, ( Hand and a half sword, war sword...many a name), with a grip for 2 full hands. Anybody can swing a piece of metal if they can use 2 hands, A Knights bastard sword only weighted 3-5 pounds. Check out "A Knight and His Weapons" by Ewardt Oakeshott.

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Posted: 16th Feb 2003 11:13
i think it's more just his foot rather then his leg I would add a line to separate the bottom of his shoe and the top if that makes any sense. Also you might want to change the file format (i.e GIF files are copyrighted or somthing and we can't legally sell a game containg them withought software licensing from someone) or at least that is what I think I heard on one of these message boards
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Posted: 22nd Feb 2003 08:20
I couldnt see the pic. Yet another fine example of the reliablity of geoshities.

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Posted: 23rd Feb 2003 14:59
The neck is a bit big?

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Posted: 24th Feb 2003 06:06
it's a good pic.....but here's your constructive crit....your shading is good but your light source is inconsistent, and as jadelion put it you should add some dimension to the boot's....in my opinion his left leg looks a little funny becuase it's not in perspective....his left foot should be slightly smaller since in that particular stance it would be farther away

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Posted: 26th Feb 2003 02:19
he's out of proportion, lower half is too big, shoes are weirdness

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Posted: 28th Feb 2003 21:33
Nice work, better than I can do anyways

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Posted: 1st Mar 2003 18:21
Same as pazza#

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denki
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Posted: 14th Mar 2003 09:22
Actually Quoth, he's legs aren't too long, his shoes are too big though, nice pic.

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