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BenDstraw
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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 08:26 Edited at: 5th Sep 2005 08:26
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After making a scene for the "War" competion. I decided it might be fun to make a tank scene on a battlefield. This is my start on I got the basic tank down but could you give me some crits. Ive been working on it and I think its pretty ugly but that happens when you look at it to much .



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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 16:38
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cool, thank Buddha its not anyother gun, but still is an implemant of destruction (also...Implement of destruction is a great song by Chimaira, maybe I'll listen to them after Dry Kill Logic)

The crit I got is that the bottom half is high detail and the top is very low detail, I'd keep the detail level the same, which can be solved in ZBrush easily (just add it as though you were drawing it )

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 17:25
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I didnt even think of zbrush for this model thank you.

I could of made a gun but then I thought Seppuku would eat me.

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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 17:29
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Its looking good. The tank turret doesn't meet the base of the tank though. Thats all i noticed. and yes more detail behind the tracks.


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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 17:30
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Quote: "I could of made a gun but then I thought Seppuku would eat me."


Hey! I'm nothing like my Biology teacher...I could swear those kidneys were human...why the cutlery in the pencil case...she scares me...

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 5th Sep 2005 18:37 Edited at: 6th Sep 2005 00:10
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Quote: "I could swear those kidneys were human"


He was probaly selling them

EDIT: Im sorry, I forgot to thank you all. Thanks

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 00:47 Edited at: 6th Sep 2005 00:49
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Minor update.

Detail added to the top as suggested .

And if you couldnt tell the top was an ortho shot and thus was only one tank. So now I have a whole tank thats a update 2.

Ill keep posting updates till well its done

EDIT: Im waiting til its near complete before running importing it to Zbrush. So it will get more detailed dont worry



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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 00:53
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the irony is he's modelling a tank, and his sig is about how its wrong to kill

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 01:05
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Naw its the year 2020 and Arnold Schwarzenegger decided to market tanks instead of Hummers........... JK

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dark coder
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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 01:13
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ahh, abrams looks nothing like that :o, better idea to model it off blueprints since they dont have any perspectave and make sure you find hundreds of reference images from avery conseivable angle so you know exactly how that area should look on your model.

for instance the reactive armour on the front is dead flat, and the shape of the top 1/2 is out of proprtion due to the image your modeling off


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Ein
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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 01:50
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Good job.
I made a abrams tank 2 or 3 weeks ago but my model was low poly.. so
here the blueprints if you need it.

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 6th Sep 2005 04:21
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Thanks guys. Im not sure if I want an exact M1 Abrams remake I just wanted the basic shape of tanks for reference. Thanks for the blueprints though, It will help me with any extra detail or proportions I want to work on.

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Posted: 8th Sep 2005 04:43 Edited at: 8th Sep 2005 07:25
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forum back on now I can use your prints, ein!

EDIT: Didnt get much done today. Ill show update tomorrow after school.

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Posted: 9th Sep 2005 06:05 Edited at: 9th Sep 2005 06:34
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Heres a test render with some updates. This is NOT a M1 Abrams clone. It my own tank to do for fun so sorry its not perfectly like a abrams. This is also just a test render I got some work to do with the shadow of tank and some more ambient objects.



Heres another test render. they're both kinda shoty but Ill work on it.



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Posted: 10th Sep 2005 00:03
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Good job Man, I like it.

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Posted: 10th Sep 2005 03:23
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Thanks alot man. It was actually your tank that inspired me to try to make one.

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