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3 Dimensional Chat / My Player model, C&c please

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Professor
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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 05:02 Edited at: 25th Sep 2005 05:10
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Hello all.

as some of you know im among the current 3d artist for the game "Blackout" One of the things the game lacked was a human model. So i attempted at one (This is my first attempt), but i want it to look reasonably good and lowpoly.. So here it is, please comment on it and point out any errors ive made or things that just dont look right .



Please comment .
Thanks

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TDP Enterprises
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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 05:36
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Bravo!

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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 06:17
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His legs are a bit too short.
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the legs should be twice the size of the torso(pelvis to shoulders) that should give you the correct proportions of your legs

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first thing i noticed was the hands. very.. flat.

but the legs, BenDStraw is right.
if u sit down and bring ur knee to your chin ull see that part is the length of ur chest. needs to be double size.


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its gort...... ( day the earth stood still)
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Snipa Masta
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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 12:35
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The green are just suggestions on the design of it, but the blue are actual problems I've spotted. If you're going for lower poly, lose the vertical bulge on the fingers - and an index finger doesn't hurt (when the character is holding a weapon, a seperate index finger comes in handy for puressing the trigger).

A microphone could be done with about 6 pollies, by the way.
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Torso looks too square.


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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 19:33
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i like the torso, i think it shows the "bulkiness" of the armor he's wearing, i think the legs could ne a tad longer, and maybe add some nifty accessories (like what snipa masta said) but other wise this is ten times better than whatever i could do

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yeh, the legs need to be longer, and also there's somethihg weird doing on with his feet

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Posted: 25th Sep 2005 23:17
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Nice! But fix his hands
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Professor
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Posted: 26th Sep 2005 06:01
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Wow thanks for the feed back guys!

Ok here are the few things ive done.

1. Remodeled the hand (It now has lowpoly fingers).
2. Reshaped the mask a little.
3. Made the legs longer.



@Snipa Masta, Ok ill take in your ideas to my model tomorrow, its getting late now..

Again please comment
Thanks for all your constuctive crit!

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Posted: 27th Sep 2005 03:32
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it looks great 'cept for one tiny little thing, the "cheeks" on teh mask look like they come out too far...

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Posted: 27th Sep 2005 18:47 Edited at: 27th Sep 2005 18:48
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Ok thanks!

Dont forget to download our demo, where in the WIP thread, check the stickys.

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Posted: 29th Sep 2005 00:21 Edited at: 29th Sep 2005 00:21
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I like the short legs...

make him look like a stout little trooper...

but he looks good with long legs also..

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Posted: 2nd Oct 2005 16:38
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woa... much better than i can do.


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Undercover Steve
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Posted: 3rd Oct 2005 17:37
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bravo! I dont know why people are being so specific, but bravo! If you could texture it it may come out decent. If you texture it wrong though it will look like a banana split:S.
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