it's a bit generic, no offense. Aliens on a space ship and all... but you seem to be doing good with it. The alien knocking on the door was stellar, still can't get over that. If you put more touches like that in, the game will be amazing.
As for the actual story, aliens on a space station is good but you could make it more original... like teh aliens are here to clear out the earthling infadels that have been coming to their planet (which we call
our moon) and stealing their oil. [Note: I reserve the right to use that] Anything to make it stand out more would be great.
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