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3 Dimensional Chat / A futuristic ship

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Drifter
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:03
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Well... here it is (attached) . 689 polygons. I'm wondering how I could improve it.

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Insanity Complex
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:12
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Make an image of it... Jpeg is preferable. http://photobucket.com <---image hosting

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Drifter
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:17
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Ok, sorry. Here it is

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Xenocythe
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:18
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Tjats not too bad! Keep up the good work!
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gbark
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:31
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Haven't downloaded it, but it looks good from the screenies.


A few suggestions though, if ya don't mind...

I would close up the two large empty spaces on either side if I were you. With just the two engines connected to the front like that, it doesn't look very aero-dynamic (that spelled right??) It would make a very nice hover-craft type vehicle if you went ahead and covered that, maybe even make the wings look like solar-panels or something.

Where does the driver sit? The whole front looks completely closed-in, replacing one of the panels with some sort of view-port would really make it look nice. But of course, it depends on what you're using it for, if it's supposed to be some sort of battle vehicle, then you'd best leave the front the way it it. But if it's for some joy-rider, you need it nice and sporty.


Very nice ship, lots of possibilites.
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BenDstraw
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2005 22:36
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very simple especially for how many polies are in it. Its a nice start keep trying and you'll get it.

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Wiggett
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nice but rework teh textures on the main pod, looks like a skyscraper all muddled up, i reckon you could do something real nice with that ship though, looks funky in design

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zircher
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Just some thoughts at random: add running lights using polygons with a high ambient color to the engine nacelles, depending on the scale you can add white spot lights to the front, engine glows to the back, a unit decal on the main body, or wing designs like an oriental dragon. Have fun and try several variations.
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Posted: 24th Dec 2005 20:17
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nice! what it mad in?
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Drifter
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Posted: 25th Dec 2005 04:24
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I made in milkshape

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Posted: 30th Dec 2005 01:43
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kool thanx.
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