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3 Dimensional Chat / My first House model in Milkshape (Exterior and Interior)

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Xenocythe
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 00:51
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Since its my first, thought I could get some feedback. Any comments are welcome. Point out anything you like or don't like. You can do all that, but please organize it like so:

Pros:
blah blah

Cons:
blah blah

Overall:
blah blah
blah OUT OF 5 stars

Other:
blah blah


Exterior (Outside):


Interior (Inside):


Thanks for your time and comments, bye!

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Mucky Muck Ninja
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 00:56
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Pros:
Pretty decent modelling

Cons:
Horribly stretched textures

Overall:
Its pretty good but the textures kill it.
3 out of 5 because of that.

Other:
How many polies is it?

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Frozen Flame
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Pros:
looks low poly, good for first house model

Cons:
textures seem.. to stretched
roof is akwardly angled

total:
2/5

others:
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Xenocythe
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 01:00
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Model is 580 polys, I'm trying to keep it as low as possible. I will fix the textures, as for the roof it's meant to be in that style, but could you lead me in the direction of the kind of roof your looking for?

Thanks for the comments! Pretty quick too

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BiggAdd
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 01:03
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its an ok model. That roof may need a look at though. Also that texture needs re-doing. Keep it up though.



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Xenocythe
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 01:07
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Heh, thanks for the feedback BigAdd, but I would like it if you had done it in the style I showed in my post

Yeah, the roof, I'm aiming for something other than a big triangle. Anyone hav some suggestions?

Textures, will all be fixed.

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Zergei
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I think you could lower even more the number of polys...
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Xenocythe
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 02:01
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Erm... ok... any comments about the model itself?

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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 02:06 Edited at: 8th Feb 2006 02:08
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Pros:
You have a door and a window that look to be scaled right

Cons:
The models itself is a bit odd shaped.
First I can't tell but is the chimney in the middle of the house?
kind of an odd place for it.
Second i think the house is too thin for how tall it is, it may need to be leanning against a cliff or something.
The window looks sideways.
The roof is kind of an odd shape too.

Overall:
it has potential. 3 out of 5

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Xenocythe
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 02:27
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Thanks I will look into all of this.

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Classic Evil
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I have a few suggestions/questions
1. for the textures try finding pictures of wood or shingles off the internet
2. make the textures or find ones that are huge such as 1200,1200 this way they will be able to get scaled down and it looks alot better than scaling them up
3. is it possible to show pictures on your posts whith out using a website?

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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 8th Feb 2006 17:26
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Pros:
Nice modelling, good start

Cons:
Texture is horrible (no offense) - Try and my is smaller
Proportion, is out of the window (excuse the pun)
The way you did the window and door could be improve, try cutting them out instead of building around them

Overall:
Its a good start, but sounds like you want real crit, so I'll be blunt, it could improve quite a bit, I understand it is your first house, so its good, but theres still a way to go, this is the fun of learning, now you have a model built, you have a great chance to learn as much as you can from it, and to improve it

Model 1.5 OF 5 stars
As newbie 3.5 out 5 stars
It about average, nothing special, but shows promise in creativity


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cloneboy
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Posted: 10th Feb 2006 02:17
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Good model, weird shaped roof, and pretty bad textures.

Overall: 3/5
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