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JimB
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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 00:04 Edited at: 12th Mar 2006 11:19
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Hi all
I have been modeling a Willys jeep in Gamespace,I'm just finishing off the texturing, so I would like some crits and suggestions please.
As I will eventually offer the model for sale should I leave out the numbers ,anyway see what you think.
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Renegade
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The model looks great and the texture is also nice,
but you still need to work on the windows IMO, especially the side
windows.
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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 02:29
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cool but i agree with renegade th ewindws need help.

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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 05:43
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yea windows and the back cloth part doesnt seem to be as beat up as the front. great model though

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G Man
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Hey that's pretty spiffy! Maybe do a bumpmap for it...

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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 06:52
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Looks good!

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Wiggett
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wow very nice. looks like operation flashpoint quality.

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Chris Franklin
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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 10:48
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Sweet i need to learn to model better

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Joh
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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 12:27 Edited at: 11th Mar 2006 12:27
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Very nice. Just needs a little texture detailing - what Renegade and Oddmind said.

Might want to add some texture details to the hood/bonnet part. Like grooves,rivets or those things that hold it down. Also for the canvas. since your texture seems highres enough.

Whats the back look like? And the undercarriage, I see some suspensions there.

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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 15:57
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i have an idea put a couple of rips in the back canvas part so it looks more beatup like the front.

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JimB
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Posted: 11th Mar 2006 18:03 Edited at: 11th Mar 2006 18:10
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Thanks for the replys guys,Renegade what type of work do the windows need?
I agree the tarpaulin canopy could be distressed a little.
Heres a couple more shots,one where I changed the decals,and one of the chassis.
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JimB
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Posted: 15th Mar 2006 14:38
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Thanks again for the input but I think I will leave it as is for the moment.
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Posted: 17th Mar 2006 00:39 Edited at: 17th Mar 2006 00:39
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Well if you asked, I did a search in google and found this picture.
I know it's not the same as your jeep but you can see that the side windows have some
sort of frame, plus they have the same wrinkles as the cover (sorry for the bad wording) since the window is not glass
but a transparent plastic bag or something.
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JimB
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Thanks Renegade but before I do that I want to get my original jeep model up to the same standard and finish the crew.

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wow this is going to be nice maybe nice enough to sell this model.

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I love the new (old) jeep, nice texture on this one,
IMO you just need to add some depth to the wheels.
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Comon.. its a exelent work.. (more good as some comercial games)
i have one of these.. (But i broke the cardan,.. crap..)
i like the model and the texture.. the windows are fine.. thinks this model is for a game... not for a movie..
its exelent man..

(can meke more low poly.. i mame one of 400 polys.. )

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I have to agree with the comments that the car texture is great, but the windows are not so great. I find that black works good for windows if they have no transparency. Then you would add your dirt spray over the black, with the edges most dirty, and working to less dirt in the middle of the window, then you would add your wiper effect to that. some smear, maybe use a path for the wipers, and a wide brush to smear the path.

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Nice I like the people in the jeep, are you serious that the first ones only 2000 polys dang, i must really like to model high cuz if i made a model like that i'm thinking it would be at least 7k

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JimB
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Posted: 5th Apr 2006 23:34
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Thanks DB newbie

Renegade, the texture is the same as the covered jeep only without the canopy part.

neodelito thank you,you are right it is meant as game content,for movies I would have put a lot more detail in.For 400 polys (tris) it would'nt look the way I wanted

Pincho Paxton I did'nt use any transparency on the windows,windows are not a strong point of mine however I'll have another attempt at them,thanks for pointing it out.

poke a fish thank you,yes the tri count is 2057,I could get it down by removing the shovel,axe,petrol can,spare wheel and exhaust pipe but I think it looks better with them
All thats needed is enough mesh too hold the shape and let the texture take care of the rest ,at least thats the idea.
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those vehicles are pretty sweet, i think that they would be good enough to put into a game, i agree with the windows of the first one, they look a little plastic but other than that it looks great

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JimB
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Thanks Dark Master,the windows again hmm I'll keep trying
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