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3 Dimensional Chat / Cabin in the woods

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 8th Jun 2006 11:57
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just made a simple cabin scene. other than the trees being to dark what do you all think of it.



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SpyDaniel
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Posted: 8th Jun 2006 12:18
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The textures on the house need tiling more, the planks are too big and the bricks need to be smaller. Its all good besides that.



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Insanity Complex
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Posted: 9th Jun 2006 04:33
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Same as Higgins said...oh yeah...and the trees are a bit dark.. heh





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Mucky Muck Ninja
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Posted: 9th Jun 2006 04:35
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Thats quite nice, however as Higgins said it looks like a mini house. Just increase the tiling on all of the house textures, and the grass could be tiled a little more as well.

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QuothTheRaven
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Posted: 9th Jun 2006 04:46
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Nice lighting man

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Insanity Complex
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Posted: 9th Jun 2006 04:47
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Quote: "mini house"


I think the term is: mouse house.




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BenDstraw
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Posted: 9th Jun 2006 11:29
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thanks alot guys. im adding to the scene alittle cause i kinda like it. i made it alittle brighter. turned up the tiling. turned up the sampling. and added some ambient objects. and trying to get ambient occlusion to work but its being a beast with my alpha maps. so ill give you an update alittle later.



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BenDstraw
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Posted: 11th Jun 2006 11:01
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well i couldnt get ambient occlusion to work. but i think ill settle on this image as a final. the only thing i dont like is the vase. it doesnt seem to fit but im done with this image time to move on. but atleast i learned alot.



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Pincho Paxton
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Posted: 11th Jun 2006 17:10 Edited at: 11th Jun 2006 17:10
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I know another reason it looks small. That's because the roof peaks way above the top of the door. So if you were say as tall as the door, then the roof would be way up, like a second storey, so it really needs a top window or higher door.

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Supremacy
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Posted: 11th Jun 2006 18:22
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take the vase away and make a wheel, make the door taller and put a roof window, change the rock textures, eliminate the wood logs, but put wood sawn truncks on the field, to look like a lodger leaves in the cabinet

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SpyDaniel
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Posted: 11th Jun 2006 23:14
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Ben, to make the door way more fun to look at, add some side panels to it, just to add more detail. The door does have to a little taller though.



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Pincho Paxton
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Posted: 12th Jun 2006 00:13
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It'd make a good hen house though.

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ALPHA ZERO PRODUCTIONS
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Posted: 12th Jun 2006 06:40
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i'd sure love 2 b an owl there ......so many mice ready 2 b eaten...lol


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looks preety good ..except for the texture for the logs....doesn't look real

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BenDstraw
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Posted: 13th Jun 2006 05:07
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thanks for all the advice guys!!

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Posted: 13th Jun 2006 18:25
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Nice work, I think the grass could do with scaling down a bit

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The crazy
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Posted: 14th Jun 2006 21:05
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Pretty good man. I'm totally digging those trees

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Posted: 14th Jun 2006 21:43
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I like your Render... nice.. You win 2 carrots..


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Merrie
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Posted: 15th Jun 2006 19:50
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I think its a great start. Only comment I would make, from a novice 3D artist myself, is put a door frame in and make it a touch bigger to overset the large space between the door and roof, or an attic window.

The trees look really good! And I would tone down the grass a little bit, make it a touch darker, less shine.
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