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3 Dimensional Chat / My first humanoid

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Sureal Chris
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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 02:50
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this is my first successful organic model what do you all think. And yes I kmow it looks very vincent but thats the way it went.
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Bahamut
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 02:56
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Ok, the bottom half of the body isn't bad, although the legas are a bit long, and the knees too low.

The top half needs serious improvement, I'm afraid.

Either the arms are too low or the neck is too long. Take your pick. Remember the arms come directly off the shoulders, not half way down the body. I'm not sure what he's wearing, but it looks like a space suit without the visor. If it's supposed to be material, make it less rigid. It's not as bad as I make it sound. The only real problem is the proportion and lack of shoulders.

The head is pretty good. Not alot to say about that, it's pretty successful. This is a real positive because heads are the hard part. The hands are quite good, although two fingers creeps me out.

Good luck with the improvements, they're very important, but there aren't very many.

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Sureal Chris
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 03:04
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I think the head is the worst part, thats why most of it is covered up as it has no actual mouth. No eyes either, just souless pits. Looking back at him now, he does seem to have an exceedinly long neck. Thanx for the crit i see what I can do with him.
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Pincho Paxton
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 15:03
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Take him out of the barrel and he might look OK.

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Manic
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 15:11
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head on over to www.fineart.sk and look at andrew loomis's books on anatomy.

hell here's a direct link;

click me

have a read of the figure drawing section, and then have another crack when you know what a human really looks like

I don't have a sig, live with it.
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Sureal Chris
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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 18:12
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The main problem is the torso. I didnt make it from scratch, It was addapted from a free model found somewhere on these forums (i cant remember where so my apologies to the creator)as was the head. the legs and arms i made from scratch and scaled to fit. Iv encluded some shots and youl see why his face is covered up in that 'barrel'
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