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3 Dimensional Chat / Female WIP - Warning Nudity (Little peoples shouldn't look)

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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 15:43 Edited at: 21st Jun 2006 15:44
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If you your parents don't like you looking at naked ladies, then click toggle now or press back, if they catch, you're to blame if they go mental, with some parents, artistic nudity makes no differance to them . (Or in my case its me mocking my parents if they draw naked posers )

I've been caught up with programming to give my modelling anything since I stopped working on Vincent and Bahamut (but they will be left until another time)

I decided to model something that isn't Final Fantasy related, and came up with this female character, she still needs quite a bit of polygon work, where things look a little ugly, but I will fix that, she will need her head attached, some clothes, hands, hair, texture and I may use displacement maps, but I haven't got anything successful out of displacement mapping yet.

Made in Hexagon 2.1

[edit] Oops no pics






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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 15:51
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*smiles at the thread title and watches this become the most visited thread on the forum*

Nice model - you build from scratch or modify from Poser?

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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 17:03 Edited at: 21st Jun 2006 17:04
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not too bad, i'd date her

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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 17:04
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lol, thanks, and yeah its from scratch, Poser is cheating

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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 18:39
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looks good. Her hips are a little pointy, also her eyes are alien like. I think they're too big. I think her head's too tall also.






Oh yeah and she's decapitated

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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 19:10
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looking good dude.... ur getting better at this character modeling business.

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I think her rear sticks out a little too far. Other than that its nice
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This is way better than most organic efforts I've seen. Overall it looks very good. I'm very impressed with the arms, mainly because I always get scewed up around the elbow. You seem to have kept it all impressively neat even in those hard to reach areas.

There are a couple of odd bits though.

Her arse is way to big and sticks out too much at the sides.

There are seams where you've clearly mirrored for symetry, but you havn't tidied up afterwards. Just below the ribs/breasts and the neck are the main offenders here. It gets quite sharp-it should be flatter.

The back is similar to the point above, though due to the fact that the back does dip in naturally, it's nowhere near as obvious.

The top of the back is a bit odd. There should be two (barely noticeable) shoulder blades-one on each side and a dip in the middle. You seem to have done the inverse.

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thank you for all the comments, I will take them into account on the clean up of the model

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Posted: 21st Jun 2006 23:10
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Definatly a big improvment over your previous 3d blundering () but needs abit of tweaking as everyone here mentioned.


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What a world we live in when nudity is considered to be avoided, but the fact that the model is decapitated goes without any warning whatsoever.

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Quote: "What a world we live in when nudity is considered to be avoided, but the fact that the model is decapitated goes without any warning whatsoever."


Well thats the way of the world

Quote: "Definatly a big improvment over your previous 3d blundering but needs abit of tweaking as everyone here mentioned."


thanks

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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 04:57 Edited at: 22nd Jun 2006 04:57
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uhm sorry for lack of wacom tablet these are moused...



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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 04:57 Edited at: 22nd Jun 2006 04:59
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err... at least this is what MY girlfriend looks like >,>... XD



These should give you a bit of help from the anatomy side of things. I also added obvious things such at the third eye on her forehead... and dragon wings/back spikes on another i didnt upload >,>

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hey yer make her into LABARYNTH!!! THE QUEEN OF OF THE THIRD EYED UNDEROWRLD!!!!

Nice model though. Let me be the first to say...

Her breasts look a bit scary. Maybe tell her to cut back on the silicon insertion.

I love it when nerds post on 'warning nudity' topics.

Lol, anyway, nice start. Will be good updated.

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She's looks alien, not human, which is good if you made an alien woman.

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@Odd mind, thanks, I see another Jonny Ree here , talking of Wacom, what sort of price are they, I was photoshopping with my mouse and it just gets on my nerves.

@Greenlig thanks, all will (hopefully) be fixed in the tidy up.

Quote: "I love it when nerds post on 'warning nudity' topics."


Nerds? Nerds?! I'm just your regular geek, nerds don't have a life, I do

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Posted: 22nd Jun 2006 15:03
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you can pick up a graphire tablet for about 80 quid.

you need to think about your edge flow, at the moment its very.. erm.. gloopy. (I can't think of a better word....)

your edges currently don't do that much, and everything looks a bit stuck on. you need to think about muscle flow, especially around the breasts, shoulders and crotch. Basically, your edges should match the way that muscles are laid out under your skin, this gives you a much more believable topology, is over all less poly intensive and will help deform your models better when animated.

have a look at this great example of poly flow from a chap called ChaosEidolon over at polycount




click the image to go to the guy's thread.

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thanks for that dude, I'll bear all that in mind

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edgeflow... I hate that, I can never do it. Probably because i never plan out anything I model. Just cuz i dont want to scan it in and resize ect change computers go downstairs all that crap.

again once i get a wacom table... ; ;


and thanks musashi i have a tendancy to quote him (well once in geek culture) but i guess this could be considered a graphical representation of the form i would wish to convey upon 3d space O_o.

nah just kinda... needed red marker on it is all.

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Quote: "but i guess this could be considered a graphical representation of the form i would wish to convey upon 3d space O_o."


Keep on practicing dude and you will, I think from your last work I saw on a humaniod, shows promise to that, try some high poly/sub d work and see how you get on

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Quote: "err... at least this is what MY girlfriend looks like"


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