it looks fairly nice, still some anatomical/proportion issues. It's pretty common, the masculinity showing through from mostly modeling males.
Shoulders are still a bit broad, hips are not those of a woman. I'm not saying give her a big ass, but they aren't really child bearing hips at all.
arms might be a tad too short, might be just her long legs.
Added some lines on the face for emphasis suggestions, her facial structure looks very asian, but the fact that she's caucasian tells me her cheek bones shouldn't be so high, and different things need to be emphasized. overall making it a bit shorter up and down, or at least pulling the jaw up and cheeks a bit down and out should do.
also the legs were a bit skinny for the way you made her arms look, a bit more meat on them with the added hip and latisimus dorsi suggestion lines will emphasize her femininity as whole.
I also sketched in the basic female figure, see how the hips connect to the legs almost seamlessly? that hourglass-ish figure is what makes the female, also the hip bones force thee hips up much higher than that of a male her same height, thus creating the illusion that the torso is much shorter.
to counter the hips on a femalethe rib cage should stick out a bit more, yours looks a bit smushed and flat in places, you have to remember that it is a round object. Even with only a few polies there are the certain points where the silhouette is crucial. front side and 3/4 view should all look proportionally correct.
