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eek
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Posted: 18th Oct 2006 06:34 Edited at: 29th Oct 2006 08:02
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Pardon the title, minimum 6 characters. Well, here is the first man I have modeled. No texture yet, still learning that and I want to purchase Ultimate Unwrap 3d. Crits welcome.




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SimSmall
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Posted: 18th Oct 2006 15:57
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Well, the lower half of the legs is a little bit of a pointy shape, but that'll be due to the polygon count. For the first attempt at a human, it's good, It's about as good as I do, and I've now done 3... It's better than my first human, (hopefully no one remembers it) and even looks like it would animate well too.(I don't know whether you even thought about animating it)

When you get a texture done, show it again, this shows potential and looks like it could be good when finished... good luck with it
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Oddmind
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Posted: 18th Oct 2006 17:28
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the only major problem I see is with the pelvis, or lack there of. This is a given on your first try, as there are several ways of making sure it gets in there. Just find one you like .

formerly KrazyJimmy

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eek
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Posted: 19th Oct 2006 01:46 Edited at: 19th Oct 2006 01:46
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Thanks SimSmall and Oddmind. I think the legs may be a bit pointy, but I think at a different angle they would better. As for the pelvis, any suggestions on fixing it? Maybe should I just add another section of polys above the leg line to add more detail? Is the problem that the waist doesn't curve in much? I'm taking anatomy right now, but it's hard to apply. :p Thanks again guys!
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Jerok
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Posted: 19th Oct 2006 02:11
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looks good reminds me of my first human model almost the same amount of polys too
you might want to check out this tutorial it has some good reference images to help with the anatomy of your model
http://www.joshonen.ch.vu/
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Ooh nice! That should help me quite a bit. Thanks!
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