Sup guys,
im designing a game called cold blood.
I will purchasing model pack 3,4, and 5 tonight so i have alot of the media.
Right now my main question is the story line.
I'v come up with 2 stories, I'd love it if you could tell me which one you like better.
And PLEASE give constructive critisizm on my work, i really want to improve the plot
************ #1 *************
Recently, North Korea has tested weapons of mass
destruction – Nuclear bombs. The estimated four kilotons of
explosion became less than one do to a test failure. All countries
of the world are under caution due to North Koreas unsuspected
bomb experiment. We dispatched air force planes from the Pentagon
to fly into international air territory near North Korea to
detect
radiation threats if they existed. Large waves of radiation were
found hovering high above the southern part of the county. They
send in you, John Conway and your team to intercept more
information on the radiation waves emitting from North Korea. US
team officials state that the radiation was detected from an
underground source and had rose above the surface threatening all
inhabitants in the southern half of North Korea. Your first
mission originally was to find out more information on the testing
and receive any crucial documents, but you are not half sure
about what you will encounter or what hardships you may come
across on your expedition.
************ #2 *************
You were a simple journalist, gathering information on the
nuclear weapon set off in North Korea. Staying at the Pyongyang
Koryo Hotel, Pyongyang’s most attractive tourist hotel, something
goes terribly wrong. The streets are empty, the train stations
departure boards are blank, windows broken, the city is deserted;
somewhat. Your only way out of Pyongyang, is to travel north to
Sunch’On, a chemical power plant above of the capital city. You
should find more information on the chemical threats and uses of
the explosion; this could lead to death, or fame and fortune if
you make it back, alive.
North Korea has had a past of lying, they now apologize for their
mistake of setting off the nuclear weapon, they are covering
something up. It is my job to find out what, as just a mere
journalist I could save thousands of lives from radiation expose
and bomb threats. I must get out of here, I sense there is still
life in this town, just not visible to the eye…
Thank you all in advance,
-iGd
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