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FPSC Classic Product Chat / - Cold Blood - Story line question

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iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 00:28 Edited at: 2nd Nov 2006 00:30
Sup guys,
im designing a game called cold blood.
I will purchasing model pack 3,4, and 5 tonight so i have alot of the media.
Right now my main question is the story line.
I'v come up with 2 stories, I'd love it if you could tell me which one you like better.
And PLEASE give constructive critisizm on my work, i really want to improve the plot

************ #1 *************


************ #2 *************


Thank you all in advance,
-iGd

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iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 02:37
Bump

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Errant AI
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 03:43
I like #2 best. The player can learn more about the story as the character does instead of having a bunch of backstory.
iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 06:38
Thanks eAI.
i appriciate your feedback.

cmon guys, more people please comment

-iGd

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Candle_
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 06:46
iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 06:48 Edited at: 2nd Nov 2006 06:49
oooo... what is that suposed to tell me? theres a commerical title that isnt in the name of mine?
Maybe if you could give me some constructive critism id be more polite unstead of just linking somethin for no reason.

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Candle_
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 07:25 Edited at: 2nd Nov 2006 07:26
It means the moon is closer and the water will drain.
Buy some penny stocks now.

iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 07:31
Candle_.
I asked for constructive critism on my story, not hijacking my thread showing meo ther pieces of work that dont even have anything to do with mine.

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Candle_
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 07:43
For one thing that was a movie with the same name.
I have no reason to high your thread. I could care less about your game.
Grow up.

iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 15:41
Candle,
If you could care less about my game then why post?
If you want to talk about movies go to geek culture, not my thread.

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xplosys
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 15:55 Edited at: 2nd Nov 2006 15:57
Both stories are vague and uninteresting. That's why you have not received many comments. There is nothing here really to comment about. Sorry.

Quote: "im designing a game called cold blood.
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You probably meant to say "thinking about designing a game" since you have no story line yet.

Happy game making.

The forum provides a means to hide our true identity. Too bad we always screw up and let it be seen.

iGd
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Posted: 2nd Nov 2006 16:32
I have 2 story lines and im happy to use either one.
So yes i am designing. im getting all of the media.
so yes i have already thought about designing and im designing now

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