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FPSC Classic Models and Media / A Table That I'm Making "My First Model Ever"

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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Posted: 29th Nov 2006 17:27
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Hello everybody first off i just wanna say it feels real good to be back on the forums but anyways i realy want people to see my first model that I ever made. Its not all that great or anything, but i do give myself some credit for my first model ever. so it would be great if you guys can give me some feedback on the model. Please lay it on me easy lol. When I complete the model I will donate it to the community for free thank you all for your time......Duva A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ

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Father Tree
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Posted: 29th Nov 2006 17:28
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looks good

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Luke314pi
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Posted: 29th Nov 2006 17:44
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Not bad for a first model. It is a little plain looking, but if you can do this model, then you should be able to make a more interesting table like this pretty easily:



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Nice looking table.

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yeah, does look a little bit plain, maybe not make it so long and add some rounded off edges and ermm... what ever you think would make it more intresting
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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Sorry about making it so long, it was gonna make like a "resident evil" type of table for our game "Out Gunned {The Demo}" but I don't know if i'm gonna use it. Thankz a million everybody your your feedback so far when its done i will upload the free table on the forums and our website since our website now holds 800 gigs here is the model before the texture. I'm realy tryin to get into the modeling thing so thank you all for your great feedback, but the truth is a was inspired by my good friend Jonathan Fletcher to learn how to model so cheers Jon

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Mikey spike
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ohh yeah, btw, what 3d modeling programe are you using? just out of topic but 1 post don't matter...... i hope
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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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I am using milkshape, and UvMapPro

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Not bad; I concur with the others about the length, and I would use straight planks of wood (the texture) from one end to the other without breaking it up. It looks a bit more like a wooden floor texture.

But great job on taking the initiative to make your own work; it takes time, but keep it up.

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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Hey Luke314pi i'm working on the table you want me to try to model but i'm making a compact version of it. I should have some screenshots soon thank you luke, and everybody thats supports us

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Yeah, milkshape isn't the easyest 3d modeler to learn to use, i sugest using sketchup, it'll make it like 10x quicker and easyer to use, get it at www.sketchup.com (not trying to advertise just giving out some info) hope this helps
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Quote: "800 gigs"


My ENTIRE HARDDRIVE only holds 180 gigs! Minus that used for Windows + the backup partition! And you have 800 on a site? Dang, I have about 15 megs on my current server

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Quote: "I have about 15 megs on my current server"


I have about 5gb.

nice start on modeling by the way, hope to see more!


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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Ok Luke314pi here is the model you wanted it did it a lil different and i made it compact. I hope I did good for my second model. please everybody let me know. here is a screen shot

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Posted: 29th Nov 2006 23:46 Edited at: 29th Nov 2006 23:46
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Nice work! This is a big improvement over your first model.

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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Posted: 29th Nov 2006 23:59
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Same thing with a differnt texture Luke314pi

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Posted: 30th Nov 2006 00:03
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Good to see that you are making your own stuff and not yelleng at us! Anyway good job for the first model.

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I think i'm gonna scrap the first model, and give you guys the second one for free I was gonna add it to our new upcoming model pack called A4'sMP1. but I owe it to you guys since I have been a pain in the past. so I realy wanna make it up So as soon as it get it FPSC ready and pack it up in our custom installer. I will add it to the fourms, and our website

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Ok I figured it out i'll add it to the pack, and give you the model free to. So incase people don't ever see this thread and buy our pack they will still get the table model and others

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nice work A4, keep it simple, look at things and see how primitive shapes make it up, your getting the hang of basic box modeling, a good start to modeling generic items


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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Thank you jon, I will take your word for it cuz your the best 3D artist in my eyes and pretty much everybody elses, i mean look at model pack 5 It was awsome. I'm now showing a screen shot of my wife april aka appy that jon is modeling for our game "Out Gunned {The Demo}" Good work jon i see good things in your futher I can't wait till the appy model is done. Cheers Jon

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You second table is better you just have a problem with the texture.
I would suggest you get Wood Workshop.
It is free and you can get some decent wood textures with it.
The texture you have now is not so hot.
Not bad for your second model.
And kudos for listening to those giving you good advice.

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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Quote: "You second table is better you just have a problem with the texture.
I would suggest you get Wood Workshop.
It is free and you can get some decent wood textures with it.
The texture you have now is not so hot.
Not bad for your second model.
And kudos for listening to those giving you good advice."


Thank you FredP I will go and check out that wood workshop program right now . Hey fred do you think their is a better wood workshop program out their? Like one I could pay for so it could come with more textures

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You could get Genetica; Wood Workshop comes from that program, except in Gnetica you have much more control over the results.

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A4 PrOdUcTiOnZ
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Quote: "You could get Genetica; Wood Workshop comes from that program, except in Gnetica you have much more control over the results."


Cool KeithC thank you i'll look into that, thanks again KeithC

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