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Nickydude
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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 01:41 Edited at: 8th Oct 2007 02:34
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"he is coming..."

Quote: "Story: You play the part of a sheriff of a small town. 6 miles down the road your father is the sheriff of another small town. Every week you both meet up to discuss what's going on.

Over the past few weeks your father has be telling you about weird things that have been happening... people going missing... strange creatures seen... something 'not quite right' with the town.

But this week your father hasn't shown up and he's not answering his phone, your shift has just finished and you decide to head over to the town to find out what's happened to your father..."


Here are your screen shots (with a video to follow).

Chapter 2: #1 - The main lobby.

"he is coming!..." - WIP in 'Showcase'

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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 01:42 Edited at: 29th Sep 2007 19:45
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Chapter 2: #2 - The corridor.

"he is coming!..." - WIP in 'Showcase'

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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 01:43 Edited at: 29th Sep 2007 19:46
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Chapter 2: #3 - The boiler room.

"he is coming!..." - WIP in 'Showcase'

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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 01:44
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Screenies looking good!
Would like to see more.


Cheers,
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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 01:44 Edited at: 29th Sep 2007 19:46
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Chapter 2: #4 - Under the medical facility.

"he is coming!..." - WIP in 'Showcase'

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Looks cool.
But thos wooden doors kinda don't go with the walls. I mean, it looks great, but the doors...ya' know...


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Looks good. Might wanna' make some illumination maps for the lights, though.

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Quote: "receive a rather odd phone call that she's been involved in a serious accident and is in the medical facility they have there. "


You didn't happen to read my story on my showcase thread did you? I can see you and me have a similiar story on the grounds of you lose someone and receive a cellphone call from a weirdo telling you about it.


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Quote: "You didn't happen to read my story on my showcase thread did you? I can see you and me have a similiar story on the grounds of you lose someone and receive a cellphone call from a weirdo telling you about it."


No, I didn't, looks like I'll have to change the plot.


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Wow, that looks great! Nice use of custom textures, models, etc! You might just want to add a little bit more entities in the boiler room though.
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Posted: 12th Sep 2007 16:13
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Quote: "#4 - Under the medical facility."


Come on, Nickydude! What are you doing under the facility. You know something bad is going to happen down there. I would have thought you would know better than to go down there.

Nice start. I've been shaking my brain trying to come up with something for the Phoenix Comp, and it appears that my head is empty. LOL

Best.

I'm sorry, my answers are limited. You must ask the right question.

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Quote: " No, I didn't, looks like I'll have to change the plot."


No, no, no! Don't go through all that trouble! It's okay. Now if you have a secondary plot like mine then I'm going to have to cyber slap you, j/k.

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Quote: " (with a video to follow).
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Wheres mah video?lol

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Looks great, but where does the guy get the gun from? Or does he do a bit of a houdini and produce an entire arsenal from his jacket pocket? That would be cool...

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Quote: "Looks great, but where does the guy get the gun from? Or does he do a bit of a houdini and produce an entire arsenal from his jacket pocket? That would be cool..."


His mates call him 'Rambo'


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Darn, when I saw the threads title I thought it was a game in which you had to shoot down Serdjo3D...


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@Nickydude: The only way your going to make the character have a gun work is by on the lobby bit have a dead body with the gun there. And then you have a gun to use.

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Quote: "@Nickydude: The only way your going to make the character have a gun work is by on the lobby bit have a dead body with the gun there. And then you have a gun to use."


Nice idea. But you all seem to be forgetting:

Quote: "You play the part of an NYPD cop"


Surely he would have a gun anyway?


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Oh yeahlol

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Chapter 2: #5 - "Surgery" (inside)

"he is coming!..." - WIP in 'Showcase'

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Chapter 2: #5 - "Surgery" (from above)

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Posted: 13th Sep 2007 18:46 Edited at: 13th Sep 2007 18:47
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As promised, here's a Youtube video of the wip. Yes I know there's a lot of emptiness but it will be filled.

Also, you may need to turn the brightness up a touch damn youtube darkens the video.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=kiIZwBFopno


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and for those who want to see a better quality vid, here's the .wmv, it's 28mb.

http://www.madladdesigns.co.uk/fpsc/mine/heiscoming.wmv


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Loved everybit mate. The drag marks was awesome!

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It was differnet looking, I'll give you that. I peronally liked it BUT you do have some collision problems that kills it.
I hope you do good on your future levels.


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Where the heck did the nurse come from, jeez. That was pretty freaky, man. Good job. "Under the Medical Facility" looks like something outta Silent Hill, really nice!
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the nurse probubly came from a trigger zone
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This one is looking very promising!


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yeah I know how she got there but it was freaky how she just appeared, good horror ideas.
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Looks fantastic, loved it, but the trail under the med facility was disturbing, but the level design and lighting was fantastic. Keep it up dude.

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Chapter 2: #6 - Nursery.

Look very closely and you'll see FredP's toy man in the corner.

I'd be greatful if anyone has any nursery / children toy type models they're willing to part with?



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Looking good. I like the walls and floor.


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Fred P's toy man sticks out like a sore-thumb.

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....owww....yeah.....just take that out.


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Maybe a retexture.
Then it could easily fit in to that scene.

Still looking very nice!
Cant wait to see more.


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Quote: "Maybe a retexture.
Then it could easily fit in to that scene."


I'd like more toys to fit into the children's ward but the toy man was the only thing I could find. I'll possibly re-texture it if I get chance too. Also if anyone has anything that could fit in a children's ward that they could spare...

Here's the title page, tell me what you think.


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I've changed the carpet for the nursery, which do you think is best?


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Like the texts on the menu.

But i dont like the background sorry,
Its to pixelated in my opinion...
Maybe a different picture with higher resolution.
Or a complete redone of the current one.

Also the font you are using...
I think the best thing to do is..

Use a brush, and edit the words a little, maybe some blood drips etc,

Or.

Download some free (for commercial use) fonts that are available at some sites.


Also the ingame screeny.
Is looking very very nice.
But....the first texture you used....
Maybe you could use a plain floor like model.
And add the first texture on that model.
So there is a little corner in the room where they could have
played with possible mini cars etc.

Just some ideas.

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Quote: "Like the texts on the menu.

But i dont like the background sorry,
Its to pixelated in my opinion...
Maybe a different picture with higher resolution.
Or a complete redone of the current one."


I know what you mean, it was a small pic that's been scaled up, I'll try to find something bigger and better.

Quote: "Also the font you are using...
I think the best thing to do is..

Use a brush, and edit the words a little, maybe some blood drips etc,"


I already have blood drips on the menus, I didn't want to over do the drips or make the title the same as the menus, but I'll have a play around.

Quote: "Also the ingame screeny.
Is looking very very nice.
But....the first texture you used....
Maybe you could use a plain floor like model.
And add the first texture on that model.
So there is a little corner in the room where they could have
played with possible mini cars etc."


You've given my an idea, I'll have a little 'playmat' with the road on it, I'll also try to have a car moving around on the mat on it's own.


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looks great

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@Nicky Dude: I'm making a teddy bear model if you want it when I'm finished?

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Quote: "@Nicky Dude: I'm making a teddy bear model if you want it when I'm finished?"


Please!


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Remember the zombies in Half-Life 2 that threw things at you? Well here's something I've been toying with ready for the next chapter which will take place in an underground car park: YouTube WIP Carpark test.


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Quote: "Quote: "@Nicky Dude: I'm making a teddy bear model if you want it when I'm finished?"

Please!"

Okay. I'll give it to you exclusively to you as a model only for "he is coming" but if anyother people want the model when I give Nickydude a screenshot + a email. Pls email me for the model.

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I don't see an email address? You could email me when you're ready, my email is at the bottom of all my posts.

(I'll have to start making a credits list now )


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You don't have to credit me if you want. I'm just someone who wants to help someone out.

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Quote: "I'd be greatful if anyone has any nursery / children toy type models they're willing to part with?"

I've got an animated 'Jack in the box' left over from Killer clowns.It springs open when you walk up to it and goes 'boing'
If you want it I will send it over.

It's pretty big though

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You guys are great! Anything will be appreciated. I'll be putting a test demo together if you guys are interested in testing it for speed?


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I'd love to try mate

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I like the first floor in the nursery more. Reminds me of my road mat from years ago.

It's fun to reminisce...


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