Yo. The site is full of spelling and grammatical errors. Also, the screen shots are kind of dull. Anyone who has played an FPSC game or seen the program will have seen it all before.
Heres a little helping hand though:
your story:
Quote: "
I have started my first big game ever. The name is Devil. Devil is a game that take place in the world war 2.
The story is simple.The year is 1944 and Hitler are about to lose the war after the invasion in Normandy.
The only thing that can save him from lossing this war is hell. Yeh it's true hell. There are two places in the world one in germany and one in
Antartis. those two places can be used as an portal betwen hell and the real world. By find them and peform a ritual the hell will wake upp and follow the orders from that one that perform the ritual. You playing as an Amerikan spy called Mike Fox and your mission are to find
out what Hitler and the nazists are doing. But something goes wrong when they find the portal of hell. The demons are waking up before they peform the ritual and kills every one. Every on apart from Mike Fox that are trapt intheunderground whit the demons from hell."
Heres an edit...(removed spelling and grammar errors, rephrased)
February 18th 1944. Hitler's 3rd Reich is about to fall to allied forces as Coalition troops invade Normany (it was actually a little while after that...you had Bastoigne and all that jazz first) .
Backed into a corner the Feurer is becoming increasingly erratic, rumours of Amphetamine abuse, faecophelia and suicide attempts are becoming more frequent and fears for Hitlers sanity are increasing.
(In a freakishly unlikely and historically impossible fashion) Hitler discovers the key to ultimate power...a trade with the devil. In an attempt to attain ultimate power Hitler goes to the German Portal to hell (oh come on) and performs a ritual to command the evil within, but something goes wrong and the devils are left walking the earth masterless.
As US special agent John Generic you must wander around bland stock media levels shooting Nazis and wondering where all the afforementioned demons are.*
ok so that's pretty much my best work. I wouldn't include the stuff in brackets if I were you.
*because there is no evidence of these demons in any of your screenshots.
