maindric,
the actual text is nearly "non-existant". i'm no graphics pro at all but when i look at graphics (mine or otherwise), i glance at it first. if something catches my eye, i look at it again and for longer to see what's really going on there. glancing at yours, the neon "electric clouds/smoke puff" outlines really pop and demand attention (i really like those. almost looks like "soft" magma

). at "first glance", i thought the green blurs were gaseous clouds. heh. if it wasnt for the yellow/red, i wouldn't have looked twice and noticed the green was actually text. one thing that i think would help a lot is to clean the centers of the letters out completely. make it a solid black, or atleast take any green out of it (examining the graphic, i don't see any transparency/background showing through. removing the green and either leaving solid black with crisp outlines on the inside, or allowing the background to show through, again, removing the green inside, leaving a crisp outline), would help a lot.
my 2 cents
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