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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / So Cold WIP

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bobochobo
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 16:38
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So Cold is my latest WIP and has taken Cold Winters place.
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May 3rd, 2004; South Shore's Nuculear Reactor exploded sending radioactive particles into the atmosphere. The result of the nearby Hurricane Angelo sent particles thousands of miles around the globe, contaminating millions of people. Once infected, the particles caused skin to become inflamed and then became cancerous and turned the whole body into a walking parasite.

May 4th, 2007; Three years after the militarys started fighting the Infected more than 2 billion have been contaminated. The only remaining force, a selection of the finest soldiers the world had to offer are defending the last remaining women and children. Will you die a hero or a coward?

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petsall
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 17:06
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the screen tells me nothing,,,

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Zdrok
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 17:10
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Agreed. Also, the whole parasite/zombie thing has been done to death. Maybe choose something more original.

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bobochobo
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 17:13
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True...
Its still in its begining so i guess it can change...

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Krowsnest
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 18:35
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I think it looks fine, but maybe a little polishing on the story

<-- thats been done too much

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F0aMy
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 20:16
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Dude... "so cold" what is that supposed to mean! why did you change it..?

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bobochobo
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 22:45
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lol the other one got into a tangle of where to go with the story next.

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F0aMy
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Posted: 1st Sep 2008 17:48
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But! Ok I realy don't want to be mean, but like dude? "so cold"... that game must be pretty frosty! dam, sorry hey I just realy don't like that name.

Hope I have not made you mad?

Piece out!

[b]Foamy

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Paul112
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Posted: 1st Sep 2008 20:14
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Quote: "So Cold"

Breaking Benjamin song?

Quote: "Once infected, the particles caused skin to become inflamed and then became cancerous and turned the whole body into a walking parasite."

The science there doesn't really fit...the radiation could cause cancer, but cancer is not a parasite. A parasite is an organism which lives off another host organism, and has a negative impact. The body being a "walking parasite" therefore can't be correct, as the body itself isn't feeding off a host.

Anyway Sorry might have got a bit carried away there. Screen looks good, but doesnt say much. Are you aiming for a sort of STALKER style game?

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F0aMy
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Posted: 2nd Sep 2008 23:54
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Hmmm? Yeah hes right, the screenie does not say much at all!

However with a little brains, time and some sort of awsomeness this should turn out perfect.!?

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Zdrok
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Posted: 3rd Sep 2008 02:09
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Awesomeness should be replaced with skill and patience, my friend. It's a long and tough process if you're new to it. Practice makes perfect.

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F0aMy
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Posted: 3rd Sep 2008 17:19
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yeah! you do have a point there! and yes it is true, time and patience is what is required if you are going to make a game of awsomeness!

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Cyborg ART
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Posted: 3rd Sep 2008 18:24
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The story could be worked on, but its a good base you got.


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