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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / WIP Ross51 game

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Dr Davenport
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 19:18
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Here's my first game called Ross51, there should be a screenshot below. if you want more, then my site has a demo and more screens.

[href]www.DavenportStudios.synthasite.com[/href]
It's in the demos section... Have Fun

give me a gun and i'll start war, give me somemeat and i'll make a sandwich and if you give me P.C. i'll make you want to kill yourself

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Dr Davenport
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 19:59
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Screen 2

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Dr Davenport
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 20:01
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Screen 3

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AlanC
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 21:32
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Thanks for posting screen shots.

I think it could use some light...
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I agree: the second shot is, I think, the best example of lighting, because you have contrast between the lit and unlit areas. Screenies 1 and 3 just look... sort of dark, instead scary. Using lights in the most dramatic places works better than keeping everything in the gloom, I think.

The actuall content of the rooms is fairly effective: the 3rd screenie in particular has enough clutter in it to make it look realistic and interesting, and make you believe in the world much more.

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Dr Davenport
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 23:09
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Yeah, I noticed that the lighting is different from when i took the shots, at least they do to me, but in my next level, i've added more lights. But the over all idea is as follows...

Your name is known to 2 people in the US, you and the SecDef, and there is good reason too. For 5 years, you've trained and trained to be the protecter of a top secret facility where things that the the population would do better with out knowing. 5 hours ago, messages stopped transmitting from the inner base, and you were called into action. You have 3 objectives
1- Save any scientist surviviors
2- Find cause of radio crash
3- Destroy anything that might hinder your mission
But as you decend deeper and deeper into the bunker, not knowing your locked in, you begin to notice that the goverment is slowly starting to see you more as a liablity than a soldier...

I know it's lengthy, but I want to get it out of the way. Thanks for responding.

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Apple Slicer
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 23:34
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Quote: "I know it's lengthy, but I want to get it out of the way. Thanks for responding."


What is lengthy?

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Dar13
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Posted: 16th Feb 2009 23:58
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that's not lengthy at all Dr Davenport. In fact that is short and sweet. very good story so far but you should see if you can expand on it a little bit. like why were you chosen and stuff like that.

@Apple Slicer: he's talking about his story.

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I see. Have you seen my story Dr Davenport? I call that lengthy. It stretches to the moon.

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Dr Davenport
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Posted: 17th Feb 2009 02:35
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More Screens!!!!

Only three things matter in life, Video games, T.V., and Video games. (video games are twice as important as t.v.)

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Posted: 17th Feb 2009 02:36
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Screen 5

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Quote: "Cocuments and SettingsDavenportsMy DocumentsMy Picturesrosws51snapshot17"


http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=145397&b=25

really?

Sorry, I had to. The other thread is locked. That is one of the funniest things I have ever seen.

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There was no need to post that; you did'nt have to, though I thought that was funny too.

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Posted: 17th Feb 2009 02:53
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Screenie 6

Hint: look through the window...

Only three things matter in life, Video games, T.V., and Video games. (video games are twice as important as t.v.)

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Dr Davenport
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Yeah, my bad, i thought it was how to post, it said image soooo

new pics are on the way!
and does anyone know any good computercameras (hypercam,Fraps, etc. have both, no good...) I want to make a trailer

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@Apple Slicer

I know. I am sorry. I should not of done that. However it was funny.

@Dr Davenport

What is wrong with Fraps. Works great over here.

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Posted: 18th Feb 2009 00:12
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Also, I've added a new model to be the main enemy, the mutant from the TGC store. Later in the game, you will notice some guards with green skin, model pack 4 guards, who are being *spoiler* EATEN from the inside by the first stage of these parasites.

(not like aliens chestbursters, they just burst out, mine eat their way out, maybe a model with some mutated parts and what not?)

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Story Edit.

Your name is known to 2 people in the US, you and the SecDef, and there is good reason too. Since you were 18 years old, you've trained and trained to be the protecter of a top secret facility where things that the the population would do better with out knowing. 5 hours ago, messages stopped transmitting from the inner base, and you were called into action. You have 4 objectives
1- Save any scientist surviviors
2- Find cause of radio crash
3- Destroy anything that might hinder your mission
4- Eliminate any "unnessary" scientists who know too much
But as you decend deeper and deeper into the bunker and eventually the caves, you begin to notice that the goverment is slowly starting to see you more as a liablity than a soldier...

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O.K level 2 is complete, level 3 is in post production.
When this game comes out, i'll focus on my multiplayer game, L.O.K.E, Losers Online Killing Eachother. Screenies coming soon...

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add some more trash to the floor, debris, papers, little bricks.. Also with those lab pics from the first couple screens, maybe add a desk lamp so you can get some lighting in there. it'll really make the scene scarier.

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