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Geek Culture / please review the animated logo for my game design business

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wind27382
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2011 03:43 Edited at: 23rd Apr 2011 04:05
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well I've been releasing Apps and workign to develop full fledged xna titles. i have an actual business license and such so the company is legit. Anyhow here is the animated logo for the company.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSzhzz8by6c

thanks and if you like it please review it.

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thenerd
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I like it. There could always be some little tweaks, but the design of the actual logo is clever. I like the name, too. Very nice.

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Neuro Fuzzy
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Awwh yeah the logo is great.


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wind27382
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thanks guys, i want to symbolize unlimited potential since i think computer graphics is and work is unlimited. You can always do better and push yourself further.

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Phaelax
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I like it, but I think the animation should be quicker. I think it should be done after 5 seconds, longer than that I found myself wondering when is it going to be done.

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Posted: 23rd Apr 2011 11:08
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Yep. Good, but too drawn out.

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thenerd
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2011 16:53 Edited at: 23rd Apr 2011 16:54
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Also, is there any option to make the particles of fluid bigger, or smoother? I think the small bubbles takes away from the effect. Also, at the end of the logo, perhaps you could have it so that the background fades out everywhere except around the logo. So, something like this at the end:



Puts the focus on the actual logo and not the background. Those are just ideas, though, your choice.

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bergice
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Agree with that its too long, the actual construction of the logo should probably last only for a few seconds. But looks good anyways.

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I agree with everyone else: it's a great logo but a bit too long. The first five seconds were great; the last five seconds felt a bit anticlimactic, since there were just a few little bubbles left but they dragged it on a bit.

Also, I wondered what the name of the actual company was! So maybe have the name fade in below or something. That might even detract from the bubbles at the end.

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Nomad Soul
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Nice logo man. What are you using to make it?

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bitJericho
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DP kind of has an adult undertone, doesn't it?

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thenerd
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2011 22:32 Edited at: 23rd Apr 2011 22:33
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DP can stand for many things, I can think of about 150 different meanings... Although you do have a point. Maybe you should put the full name under the logo at the end, just for... clarity.

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wind27382
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yes i was going to have the full logo fade in for the actually design this was just the animation of it. and i have to agree i will be making it faster.

also you aren't the only one who though of DP
every male friend called me a perv.

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It's simple, but the DP itself looks like garbage. It's not smooth and has flat edges. I don't know why, is it 3D I'm assuming?

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wind27382
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well here is the logo with the completed flash screen. I'm hoping to use this still images as 3 second splash screen right before my apps load up. Hopefully to drive more traffic to my site once it's been finished.



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