Ok....
I watched the trailer and i've got some comments:
First off, its good quality, the level looks interesting and the gameplay is relatively action packed.
However:
1) The music is the wrong type for this kind of game.
2) The subtitle look cheap (would you ever see them on a real game trailer; i've never seen "Aw, ****" on one before)
3) Screwed up voice (possibly done on purpose)
4) The first shot is too long (just some guard in passive mode)
5) There's no info on the game, not even a title.
6) It really only takes place in one area of a level, you want to showcase a variety on enviroments, enemies and gameplay.
Speaking of variety, could i interest you in a
crosshair pack?
AE