I played it.Here are my thoughts.I pretty much agree with Maeko's review.
I have to add a couple of things.Where you did the windows and ledge thing was pretty cool.That was good.
I didn't get fired on one time through the whole level.That was bad.I know some of the ai is horrible but no one even shot at me.Not once.
As was previously pointed out you need to make some of your rooms smaller.
I am guessing you made this with the demo version and just uploaded the .fpm because you can't build a game.
None of it really made any sense.
This isn't the worst FPSC game I have played but you need to grow back to the drawing board.
You might want to check the scripts forum for some better ai or read a tutorial or two from the forums.There are tuts that cover all sorts of stuff.
Some media was missing but you alredy know that.A washing machine (or is it a dryer) in the bathroom?Why?
There were no objectives,no surprises,no keys and no reason to do anything but go from the beginning to the end of the level.
It gives the term "linear" a whole new meaning.
It was boring.
I will give you an "E" for effort.
With some effort this could be made into a decent level.
I would get some more info from the FPSC forums and its members and then go back and improve on this.Make sure you get the full version so you can post an .exe link so we get all of the media.
I didn't post this to hurt your feelings.I was just being honest.
Learn a little and then try it again.
Nobody makes a killer game/level on their first try.
Keep it up and you will get the hang of it eventually.
You actually accomplished something.
I applaud you for your efforts.Let me know when you are done improving this and I will be happy to give it another shot.