your story is full of spelling errors and frequently doesn't make sense.
Quote: "Cold Fire. Cold Fire is set in a distant land. You play as Sergent Luther Hunnings to explore and retrieve the very rare cold fires that litter the planet of Hendoff. When you arrive there are many strange things. There is a flurrishing undead civilation that seems to become very fond of the cold fire. You must go in and destroy the oposing undead mases and save as much cold fire for your men to come in afterwards and pick the good up."
I just didn't think it sounded very good. Anyway, I was bored waiting for a download, so I wrote you another version. Tell me what you think.
Quote: "Planet earth is a miracle, because from a 1 in 192billion chance, life evolved.
But Earth is not special. All planets are unique in their own way, and as earth came to learn, sometimes for one planet to survive, it must rely upon the uniqueness of another.
In 2037 a pandemic swept most of the Northern hemisphere. Initially US and UN councils feared the beginnings of terrorist strikes on a massive biological warfare scale. But they were wrong. The pandemic came from nature itself, a cancerous viral infection, that prevented
the body digesting food.
A fifth of the world's population starved to death in 2 months.
Dispite exhaustive research, no cure could be found. In a last ditch attempt to find a cure, The global council decided that other planets would be explored for new minerals and possible antidotes.
2 years later, they found Hendoff, and with it, cold fire.. and salvation.
During Hendoff's harsh, sunless winter, exothermic reactions in the atmosphere were frozen mid-reaction. This produced cold-fire. Our best hope for survival. God Bless Hendoff, our miracle planet..
Sergent Luther Hunnings is stuck on Hendoff.
A God forsaken hell hole in a dark corner of the universe.
Charged with collecting the coveted cold fires, his job is not a pretty one. Over the last 1000 years an army of souless monsters
has evolved. Enslaved to the aura of the coldfires, they prey on any living thing left on the planet. Hunnings must fend off hoards
of these re-animated flesh eating carcasses in order to complete his mission.
Get inside the mind of Sergent Hunnings, and slog through 6 levels of blood drenched, flesh eater infested, puzzle filled
mayhem, in a quest to save humanity.. and yourself.
Coldfire.
2007"
