Wrong board, this is not a WIP but a Game Theory. It should be on Game Design Theory, and even then I'd recommend you be more extensive.
* How will the game play. Who will you play? Is it a platformer? A puzzle game? I mean, we can't say anything about it this way.
* What will make the game stand out? I mean, why is this concept special?
* Do you have any sketches, character description ect.? Those really add to the credibility of your idea.
I recommend you retry starting this thread on the Game Design Theory board, and have this one locked.
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