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Hey there i am trying to build a portfolio at the moment for a future career and i have been 3d modeling on and off for about a year and a half and recently got back to serious work, and because of a want to progress i am posting my images up to get some constructive criticism and also a place to keep my portfolio.

A watchtower W.I.P, i really can not think what to add any suggestion are welcome


A pill box with 3ds max textures i have not got a clue how to texture so the texture is stretched i am following the max tutorials so should be ok soon.


A tire i have made whilst following a tutorial although it was just a bunch of picture mostly guess work to get through it i think its turned out ok although i dunno what to add in the center to give more grip.


i do have some other image but they are older work and these are my most recent works simple structures but good practice. Any C & C is welcome.

thanks,
Discostu

Hmm no comments ok a few more pictures for some more enticement

Most of these are works in progress.







any comments and critique welcome

critique on the machine gun:

- good shape of the stock
- the muzzle-flash hider is a bit wide
- the bipod needs to be a bit wider (unless you are looking at a reference that shows a very skinny bipod)

also, the sand bags should be a little more random. and maybe slumped a little

nice work

The models are simple, but it can do wonders to them by adding dirt and making the textures darker at some areas.

It is surely a very nice start.