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Asteric
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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 14:47
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Hey, thought i would have a go at character modelling and heres what i got, this is my first go so go easy on me and i would love some c&c



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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 16:10
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Sweet!

give him some fingers. And I think the whole arms needs a lil more shaping.

Great for a first.

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 16:19
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Yeah, arms are a little weak i must admit, as for the fingers im gunna have some fun with them, always come out like little sausages

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 17:45
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What program is that by the ways?

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 17:54
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3ds max

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 17:59
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here is a new screen, still workin on the hands



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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 18:01
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Looks nice, i would just make the head a little bigger.

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 18:35
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You need to check your proportions man.


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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 18:40
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I suspected as much, but as i am new to character modelling, and slightly disproportionate my self (only joking)could you tell me what i need to improve? am i right in saying the arms hands and feet?

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 18:46
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The arms are generally way too big, the entire stomach area is too wimpy an tiny, the hips are doing something strange and the legs seem a little wide.


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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:01
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hmm i see two options here, either change the proportions or he could be a starving hobo soldier with deformed hips who has a leg infection and originated from a orang-utan?

Yeah, ill try and fix those proportions for you now

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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:15
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the stomach looks fine, not every character needs to look like the hulk. As far as I see it looks pretty good, the feet could use a little work the hips look abit off, but that might just be the angle, The wrist looks like it could be a little smaller round. other than that I think it looks good. I can't really comment on the arms length cause the angle but from what I can tell they look fine I think.
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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:32
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Ok here is the model from the front



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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:43 Edited at: 8th Mar 2009 19:44
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yeah the arms are fine, just taper out the forearms abit and give em thinner wrists. taper out the calves leading to thinner ankle area, like the wrists, other than that everything else seems fine.
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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:43
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Quote: "the stomach looks fine, not every character needs to look like the hulk."

You fail to see my point, everyone has a certain amount of definition in their stomach area, whether they are fit or not. While his stomach is just completely straight from what I can see.


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Posted: 8th Mar 2009 19:55
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everyone has a certain amount of definition in their stomach area. do they? Most people I know don't work out. Not to mention that Majority of the people in the world are not all that buff either.

besides, He's wearing plated armour. how much buff do you want.
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Posted: 9th Mar 2009 18:33
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yeah major screw up on my side, i forgot to do multi saves and the file is now corrupt, and there isnt an autoback file which means, unless there are any other options, im screwed

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Posted: 9th Mar 2009 18:44
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Looks good!

What software do you use?

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looks very cool

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Posted: 10th Mar 2009 17:58
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i use 3ds max, cant seem to recover the file, so unless anyone knows of any ways, im gunna have to remodel the whole thing

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Omg, when it corrupts the file it is Sooooooooooo damn ANNOYING i had to remodel my desert eagle like 3 times because of that. You'd think that autodesk could code something properly (especially saving)!
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Posted: 10th Mar 2009 19:28
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yeah, its my fault for not multi saving though

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Posted: 10th Mar 2009 21:10 Edited at: 10th Mar 2009 21:10
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Ouch, sorry to hear that. I set my autoback to 9 and save multiple files along the way. Set up a folder and a good naming structure. firstchar_v01.max or something.

You lose your stuff once or twice before you develop a nervous twitch for saving stuff lol.

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Lol, yeah, im nearly done a remake so ill show it soon

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just be happy you didn't get very far into detailing it...
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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 18:06
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Quote: "just be happy you didn't get very far into detailing it"


Actually i was almost done, as i was hoping to texture it and make it fpsc ready, so i was keeping polys low

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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 21:51
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ok here is the remodelled version, hope you like it





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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 21:57
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Looking nice!
But i would delete some of those extruded faces and just fake them in the texture.

And maybe make the arms a bit smaller and the torso a bit bigger
And the boots alot bigger like gears of war style.

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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 21:58
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I still think the arms look too big though.


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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 22:04
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Yeah Alucard, after a while of looking at it, they were starting to seem a tad long, i will resize them now

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Posted: 11th Mar 2009 22:12
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reduced the arm length



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the body has a kind of woman shape, it's to thin. but it looks good tho

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