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Hey again, i originally started this 3 days ago, but all 5 saves of it had corrupt:S so i had to start again, this is a low poly m1 Carbine which i hope to get in fpsc, its currently at 800 polys so i have a lot of room to ad more, if you could give me some crit on what needs improving before i start the uv map i would be very grateful, thanks.







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vast improvement. you really built on it didn;t you?

other than the stock, its seems quite clean. although i take it you need the poly density there to keep the shape? now you just need it animated

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Thanks Lazerus, yeah the stock was a strange one, i could possibly get rid of a loop or so, just depends if the shape will look ok, does everything look right? Anything out of place? I am most concerned with the actual mechanism, not sure on the actual name for it other than the metal mechanical piece in the middle of the rifle Thanks.

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Posted: 28th Apr 2009 23:19
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Update : UV Map is done and i have the basic colours down



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Posted: 29th Apr 2009 00:14
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Added more to the texture, im quite pleased with it so far



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Wow the texture brings it to life! it is looking really good so far!
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Thank you very much

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oooohhh, I like it, nice start on the texture.
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Thanks you, im retiring for the night, will work more tomorrow.

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Looks great, you should make a whole ww2 pack. I bet it could be an official model pack if you include some nice weapons with good animation.

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Texture is VERy good, far better than I could do. Although, I am an ironsight nut, and I must say that your ironsights need work. They're just several stacked boxes.

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Posted: 29th Apr 2009 05:51
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Looks very nice! The mesh is very clean and smooth!

Well done!

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Posted: 29th Apr 2009 10:06
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Oh, and also, I would make the barrel a tad thicker.

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Posted: 29th Apr 2009 17:56
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@toasty, yes i realised that this would be an issue, but if i am correct, you need to versions for fpsc, one being the weapon and the other being a pickup, if this is so, i will add more detail to the iron sights, so dont worry Expect another update soon, i have started work on the texture now.

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UPDATE : Started on the wood, not overly happy but ill keep going, as you can see at the very back of the butt, there is major stretching, simply because i forgot to uv map that one polygon which wont be a problem, still need to get rid of the seams but ill do that later, hope you enjoy!



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The wood looks a bit werid,you should tone the opacity down a bit for those wood lines.

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Yes, you are right, i have toned it down a bit, how is this?



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Looks good, but i'd make the wood grain smaller

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Maybe 5% less opacity and it will be perfect.If you use Photoshop,try some color burn or lighten color options or something like that

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yeah i forgot to post the updated version here it is :



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Small Update : Im getting close to what i want, smoothed out the wood some more.



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ey, i cant see a damn thing at the new ones=P


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The new one is perfect.Will be very nice to see it finished.

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Thanks, two very varied opinions there, i myself agree with djmaster, but i may be wrong, just need to add the finishing touches to it now

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Update: Started adding the hands to the model, still needs some work, as im not quite happy with the left hand yet



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Are they MP6 arms?

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Yes they are, but i may be modelling my own if i can find the time.

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*Cough cough*
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Oh yeah, sorry Demon Air, i know you are doing a hand model for me, but im doing my own too XD sorry about that, totally forgot, it all depends on which model is best really

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I think youv alreadyu stated but can you use a nutral color like grey in you renders please, Ive noticed it on mine too so am changing the reder styles. Had to turn on my other monitor to see the render lol,
great job looks imacualte and your very proficent at texturing.

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try having the fella as a lefty just so we can see the firing mechaism, if you get it right in the animation. If not leave it as is and the side of the gun will cover it up.

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gash just me thinking it is way to dark now? XD


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You could, when he reloads have him turn the gun to the side so he can see what he's doing. And we get to see the firing mechanism

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Im sorry for the dark renders, will fix that for you, also the plan was as HLD started, have him turn the gun to see what he is doing, but i could do both version?

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The texture looks pretty good, I like the wood, but really, I think there is a certain lack of detail in the texture, as it really just seems to be a small grunge texture with some white edges on it.


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I think it looks great, nice gun. I hope you make a whole pack.

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@Alucard- Yeah, i do know what you mean, i presume you mean the middle mechanical piece? I will work on it, thanks for that.

@Darimc-Thanks man, i am trying to make a whole fpsc pack, but with more than guns, but they are the main aim for now.Thanks.

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Did you ever finish this?

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Nah, i do plan to hopefully this week, my computer got reset and it sorta put me off but i am back on track, just need to work out these bones....

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Great model, and good luck with animating it.
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Hey guys, until i can animate it with bones efficiently i will be making the other weapons for a possible pack, so this is the early Thomson WIP, still needs a fair amount of work, and some smoothing for the stock, but here you are.



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Looks good mate, looks nice. As you said maybe some smoothing but looks good so far. Keep this up.

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Yeah, looks a bit primitive now, also forgot to say, the iron sights need finishing, this time real ones, just for Toasty

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nice mate

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Having some Mesh issues at the moment, so i will add in the iron sights first, just need a good reference

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Added in some more detail, including iron sights.



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Sorry, another update, added in some more detail and resized the barrel.



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Whoa, that is sweeet.
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Heh, thanks, i have added some smoothing to the front grip and thinned
the front sighs ring, will post more pics soon.

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I love that there are more ww2 guns poping up, great work, thompson looks good to

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Both the guns look awesome, cant wait to see the thompson textured

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