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bobbyd
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here is my first model made with anim8or

its a model of a monitor

please tell me what you think

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bobbyd
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heres another pic

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Posted: 7th May 2009 17:42
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Looks great for a first model, only crit i will give at the moment is that flatscreen tv's/monitors are always wider than they are tall, try to widen it out a bit

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bobbyd
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Posted: 7th May 2009 18:08
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ive widened it out a bit
heres a pic

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Posted: 7th May 2009 18:16
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Asteric: not always, i think my friend had one wich was as tall as wide=P

Good model^^


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ive still got the one thats tall as wide


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Posted: 7th May 2009 18:41
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Yeah, but the newer models tend to boast widescreen, the computer i am using now has a square monitor but its 10 years old.

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Posted: 7th May 2009 18:46
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just pointed out that they exist^^ me myself have a 22" widescreen=P


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Posted: 7th May 2009 18:48
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Nice, yet i still love my good old 18x18x30 inch monitor or something, the thing sticks out more at the back than the length of the actual screen

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hehe^^ well, now where going off topic

u should put a nice texture on too=P


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yeah, all i can say is the screen is just a tad thick, you know what the manufacturers are like, as thin as possible.

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heres a pic the screen is slightly flatter

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Posted: 7th May 2009 21:43
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Looks great, one more thing, from that angle, it makes me think that the model isnt completely straight, probably me though, if its not much trouble, could i have a pic directly from the front?

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pic from front

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Oh good, it was just the angle, next what i would do is add some more definition, as long as this is just practice, dont be afraid to go high poly, i would suggest adding buttons on the front of the screen etc, just give it more detail in general.

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here it is with buttons

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Posted: 7th May 2009 22:04
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Looks great, keep it up

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really good, improvements that is kinnda cool O.o great job so far, keep it up, maybe make a mouse, computer, desk for it to stand on? make a scene? keep on improving this one might turn out pretty cool!


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hi, good first model... in your render use antialiases?... and in render engine you use Art render?..(anim8or beta version)

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ive made a keyboard for it and flattened the top bar as it was a bit big ill probobly make a desk , mouse and desktop pc for it tomorrow

pic of keyboard and monitor attached to post

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pic of keyboard monitor and desk

what do you think so far

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now that is great i see you took my advice^^ it is starting too look like a nice little scene =) keep it up^^


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Looking great, only crit would be to thin the desk out, as the planks of wood which make the desk are a tad thick.

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ive thinned the desk out

thanks for all the comments and crit

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Posted: 9th May 2009 15:53
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looking a lot better^^


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here it is with a desktop pc

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heres a pic with mouse

think ive finished

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Posted: 10th May 2009 00:04 Edited at: 10th May 2009 00:06
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the mouse is a bit... flat... try rounding it up a bit=P other than that it's looking good

Edit: btw i think the computer itself would make better to the right =P cuz it would be kinnda in the way if you would put a chair there=P btw, add a chair


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Very nice bobbyd, but I would have to agree with Quick. The Mouse does look a tad flat.

But other than that very nice. Hopefully more detail can be added as time goes by!



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ive made the mouse not as flat and moved the pc

im making the chair now

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still belive the mouse is too flat rly =/ other than that it is nice^^


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here it is with chair

and ive made the mouse a little less flatter

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Posted: 11th May 2009 06:28
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the mouse looks better now, and the chair was a rly nice touch^^


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thanks
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