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FrozenCore#6
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Hmmm I'm not Entirley Sure But I Think theLids Need To be More Rounded
Maybe U Just Need To Bump The upper lid out a bit


And Still The Tear Duct Thingy looks Wierd XD


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Posted: 12th Sep 2010 03:15
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while most people ive seen dont have protruding tear ducts, some do when they close their eyes, but it definately is not that much. Barely noticable.

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well done those corrections, and added some details that people over on zcenteral recommended, let me know what you think

its rather large so the image is attached


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Posted: 12th Sep 2010 20:50
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Nice

I Like It .except For The Neck The Grain On it looks A bit Wierd .. I Might Be Wrong

But Over All It's Epic :3

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Posted: 13th Sep 2010 22:39
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well i have that sort of neck grain, as does everyone i know so i dont know whats wrong there, anyway heres an update corrected the eyelids and the bags under the eye




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Hmmm ... seems like the head gets thinner at the top ...

As For Facial features It's All Good Great job

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maybe because the head is spherical?

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Posted: 16th Sep 2010 23:44
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Quote: "maybe because the head is spherical?"


however it is a little bit too thin in the upper forehead tbh.


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thanks for the feedback guys, the head does acctually taper slightly more than you may expect, i think the issue with the previous bust is that the hair has been ladin just a little too thin on the head, however i'll try a few things and see what works, anyway i started anpther full character, im not to sure what i'm gonna do with this at the moment however i will definately do something with it, tell me what you think



and if anyone has any requests i haven't done a tut in quite a while and i'd like to get back into doing them, mabey start a weekly or monthly tutorial based on the most requests, but of course i'd have to start getting requests for that to happen so feel free to ask or question anything.


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Hay-o, just a quick paintover if your looking for insperation
That and there fun


I was thiking that the biceps could be very lean compared to the surrouding pair muscels and be extruded out further, Sort of alot of skin tension at the elbow joint from the muscel size. The abs could be very lean in propotion, same as the biceps so that they are lean but have alot of depth. Have to run now, ill do some proper concepts tomorow/sunday if i get back

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Posted: 19th Sep 2010 01:52
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looks really cool laz, nice job

just thought i'd let you all know that i've started making models for FPSC again, heres a link to the thread if you're intested, i'll try and update both threads as regularly as possible

link: http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=175767&b=24


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Nice Work Mazz ,The Face And The muscle Details You put There Really Suit The Body Type ..

1 Notice : The Shoulder Muscles . they Look Wierd . I Might be Wrong , I Never really Looked At Shoulder Muscles Before

I'm Looking Forward To See The End Result

@ Laz : Paint Over looks Pretty Cool :3

@ Maz Again : Nice Work In The FPSC Thread

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hello everyone, heres another quick sketch, speant about... 1 and a half hours today on it, let me know aht you think



also, just as a bit of cred, i was influenced by this guys thread: http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?t=67018&page=2&pp=15 (his thread does include some nudity, but of 3D models, just a little warning)


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Posted: 30th Sep 2010 22:51
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It looks like a futuristic mouth guard.

Sorry, cant really think of anything else when i look at it.

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the "futuristic mouth guard" looks cool^^ model looks as great as all other work you got so i dont think i need to comment more on that!

mouth guard looks excellent, but also ancient (in form of MADE OF STONE)


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Posted: 1st Oct 2010 17:45 Edited at: 1st Oct 2010 17:46
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thanks guys, i wasn't happy with how it turned out, i like the details but not th overall shape, so i went back, remodelled the head, mouth pieces and restarted all detailing, such fun , let me know what you think

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Posted: 1st Oct 2010 18:46
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i like this alot better. Its more simple.

This is what would look good to me.

Do the same style of the mouth to the following:

Throat(the esophagus pushing the neck outward)

The nose

A portion of the head.


but i like it so far

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Posted: 1st Oct 2010 20:01
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those eyes scare me..

looks much better now!


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Very nice work, always love your ideas and how you interprete them.

Maybe as said above, create a vertabre like system for the asphogus.


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Posted: 1st Oct 2010 20:12 Edited at: 1st Oct 2010 20:17
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Laz@
i think that that is a good idea, however im thinking that a series of spinal plugs or plates would work better at adding detail to every portion of the model

thanks guys, here's yet another update, started non-symmetrical sculpting and im pretty pleased with it, tell me what you think

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Posted: 2nd Oct 2010 01:43
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here's amother update, gonna start tewxturing it now

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Posted: 2nd Oct 2010 04:59
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Hah this is starting to remind me of Doom 3 for some reason (or quake 4 if your really picky)

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Quote: "Doom 3 for some reason (or quake 4 if your really picky)"

2 completly diff games xD
but yeah, Q4 indeed, reminds me a lot of the guys from there


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Posted: 2nd Oct 2010 18:52
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Doom 3 And Quake 4 have the same graphics. xD but Quake 4 was a year later in coming out.

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Quote: "Doom 3 And Quake 4 have the same graphics. xD but Quake 4 was a year later in coming out."


my point was that the game setting, worlds,storys are completly different =)


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Posted: 2nd Oct 2010 19:03
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Ditto

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wow thats quite a debate

anyway here is another update, trying out some BPR features to try and show some more of the detail, let me know what you think




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Wooah Nice Work

Pretty Nice Details
I think Wrinkles Should be slightly Sharper At the Forehead..

Umm As For The texture . I Like The Older one Cuz It feels more ... hmmmm ... Original Or So

I Like the Green Glow On the Second One tho

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i like the render before this one. The black is good, i dont really like the glow. The rusty, dirty look was better

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thanks, it was just a quick test render, heres another one which is using some custom matcaps, let me know what you think




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simply amazing..even though most models here are heads, and there are 21 pages in the thread (well for me, at least), you still come up with nice unique things for every head

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Quote: "unique"

unique maybe,
original, sort of.
skillfull, definately

<3 it mazz

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hmmm Well I Would Prefer The Old And Dusty But As For Which looks Better ... I Seriously Dunno

They're Both Epic

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The newest one works great with the skin, but theone before looks better with the metal. Any chance of a mixup between them? It would give a hugely better contrast on the augments to organic.

Love the sculpt anyway.


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well i've been trying out some SSS shaders within zbrush, need to up the intesity on 'em, let me know what you think




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i really like it but the gap inbetween the mouth has been bothering me.

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I agree With Mmoj The mouth looks wird now

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well here is a revised sculpt, i beat him up a bit i think that this looks a lot better and quite a bit more interesting than the last sculpt, let me know what you think




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lol it looks like he was 50 years old, went through a fire, stayed in the fire for 10 years, lost all skin, and now he is 60.

fix the mouth

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looks overdone =/


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it does look overdone, but I think if you'd texture it, it would just right.

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Well Aside From The Previous posts .

In Some Way The Guy Looks Older , But As MMOJ said , It Looks Like He's Taken Alot Of Damage From Something . If Your Willing To Keep This Detail Then i Think The Metal Parts Should Have Some Damages too .

Also You Got Some plain Areas Which Need some detail even a lil would do good : *Nose - left Side of The head And Neck*

Even If You Want The Damage AS it Is Now . I Doupt That The Other Parts Will Stay That Plain

and Please Fix The Mouth xD /*soz for annoying typo* xD

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Quote: "Then i Think The Metal Parts Should Have Some Damages too "


my impression is that he has the metal parts *because* of the damage to his tissue, so they would be reasonably clean and new.

Texturing would be nice to see, I picture the scarring still red/mostly healed but relatively recent.


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well if it's as ortu said then I think u've done a great great job
Altho I Still Think That other Parts need Some Damage

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MMOJ@
i don't really like your comment, it sounds more insulting than helpful

ortu@
thanks you're exactly right, that was my intention from the start, was kinda thinking that a grenade or something went of infront of him and this is the result of schrapnal and burn damage.

frozencore#6@
thanks, i do intend to add detail to those area, don't worry, now saying 'fix the mouth' means absoulutely nothing to me, a more specific comment would help, what don't you like about it?


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Nice stuff there mazz, i think if you use the burn areas, but apply them to certain areas on the face, some areas look a little lumpy, or random. Maybe also extend the mechanics so that one side works up his face? Like at one side the burns were very severe, will make it less symmetrical.

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Like the asymmetry Asteric, the guy would probably turn his head away from the blast reflexively, even if he did't have time to turn fully damage would probably be heavier to one side.

I think the problem they have with the mouth is the gap between upper lip and implant which was mentioned some posts up, it looks like he would be constantly drooling through it.


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thanks for the advice guys, will probably help, and thanks ortu for being much more specific than just 'fix the mouth' anyway decided to do a quick couple hour speed sculpt, might acctually continue with it though, i'm pleased with the result so far, it's modelled from the head of a new base i recently finished, so that'll be uploaded to the database at some point




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freaky bro, but i think you might need to work on the basemesh because the faceting is much more noticable in the neck than on the face, i'd throw a couple more loops in there

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i like how i make a friendly joke of a criticism and it gets taken so personal.

I mean, if this was something you had worked on your whole life i would be serious about it.

And i have critiqued you and gotten no feedback, but i say one joke about it and im the bad guy.

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